when you love someone.......(قصة رومانسية رائعة)

[corvette777]

PLEASE READ THIS STORY CAUSE IT'S NICE

when i saw her **** i realized she isn't from here
she is not arabian **** but she has a big power
she has own attractive **** I never have met like her
I insist to know where she from**** i really don't know why I care
I necessary to do that**** i searched for her address
she is foreign i don't care ***** i travelled in her town
i lived in her town ***** i will stay in her town i don't care
i searched for a place to live in***** i found good i can now stay in
i threw everything&went to bed****** I just thinking in of her
i woke up and sun is rise& smiling**** this day will be long
now I have to look out of her**** i came here just to see her
I asked for her school's place****so I can study with her
yeah, i found it quick**** i entered to register in her class
now I'm so happy *** i now assured that i'll see her
oh, i have to wait one week more**** the term will start at next week
no problem, i will be patient**** i went out& tour in her town
i imagined that she is walking there**** I imagined that she's touring with me
I waited one day, twice, thirth****I really look forward to meet her
now I have one day left****one day to start the new term of school
I felt scarely**** I fear from this different life
I realized that i'm lonely in this strange country**** I will have to depend on myself
i tried to sleep early**** I couldn't , i was thinking of tomorrow
tomorrow will be the first****day in this foreign school
tomorrow i will see**** the person who steals my mind
stole my mind faraway**** to let me runaway
it's 7:00 a.m. now, wow**** i'm ready to went to school
I arrived there, my legs were quake**** I entered my class
then I looked around **** I still rememberher face
I still remember her breaty eyes***** her blonde hair
I looked around for 5 minutes**** suddenly she opened the class's door
oh How beautful she was**** she surrounded by a light
her light was so brightness***** in this time I wished her
does she know How much I care of her**** does she know I travelled in particular to see her
I must tell her now my feeling***** she is my queen in my eyes
she is all my life***** I leaved my country, family and money
I will start my life with her***** but I must tell her
I don't want to study and tiring myself***** I just do that to be with her
I have to be a brave ******to confess to you my dear
I will confess to you this day night***** i will date with you one day'
I met her in the school**** I said hi she said hi
I said please I need talk with you****** she said ok
I told her that***** i wanna met her night at sea
I choiced the sea because***** it's romantic place to confess your feeling
and we met at sea****** I told her that i living here in this town because you
I left my real life ***** cause I saw my best in you
let me to call you lovely***** you made me crazy of you
lovely look up at sea ***** and listen to me carefully
whenever you see the sea***** you feel big rest and some ardent love
listen at the waves ****and up a voice love music
then sleep and dream a romatic dreaming**** dream to be with your soulmate
dream to be with person love you so***** care about you so
lovely that isn't an imaginaton****** that's is me
lovely close your eyes and try to move***** you will can't
that's me if you will refuse me****** lovely if someone asked what is ugliest murder in history
answer &say that's me if***** i won't win you
answer &say that's me if***** i won't win you
you are my fondness& what my brain has drew
and nobody will captured my *****heart except you
when I saw your eyes***** I found myself here in your town with you
if you live in moon ***** I'm ready to went with you
lovely I really need you***** i need protiens, calcium, fats,etc
but I will stop it***** because all that stuff included in you
then i silent, I wited her response***** then i looked on her eyes
her tears were fall on her cheek******she looked at me& she hugged me
she hugged me for along time***** I felt myself as a bird
as bird can fly and has his******own freedom to go to anywhere
I feel that I don't want anything***** she is between my hand
.................... THE END.....................


so what do you thing???

[نزيف الروح]

corvette777

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well...what i think..!!!!


coooooooooooooool is the perfect word for discraiping this lovely story.....wooooooow i really like it....well done



my brother would you do a favor for me????please
becaouse i nearly enter the clup ..i'd like you to send me when ever any body wrote anything in English forum..



thanks
your sis

[Q8y]

Hello dear,

it is a nice poem and u r a go0od poet also , i like it so much , so i took i copy of this poem for me ..

i hope u will not mind to do that !

Q8y*

[corvette777]

Nazief Elrouh !!!!

Thank you dear ... I actually don't know how I wrote it... It's a deep feeling and imagination in my mind.... Thanks nazief .. about your request ... Don't worry I will send you whenever there are a new topics


My brother Q8Y!!!!

Of course I don't mind that's honor (شرف) for me to copy my poem's story,,, هل لهذه الدرجة الموضوع حلو؟؟

الصراحة انا في قمة سعادتي طالما أن الموضوع نال حسن اعجابكم ولم أكن اتوقع هذا الرد ...أشكركم جزيلا ، اشكركم من كل قلبي أعزائي...

[Q8y]

The story has been Copied and now it is stored already in my

heart ..

waiting for the second part of this story or poem , or i can call it

this beautiful shinning star ..

Q8y*

[corvette777]

Thank you Q8Y of your words....

and about this story ..it finished, but anyway i will write a new poem soon and I hope it will be better than this one...

so keep in touch

corvette

[Q8y]

You r welcome Corvette

even if this beautiful poem finished , am sure u have more in ur

mind and u will share it with us ..

all members of this forum visit this place just bcz of ur

wonderful words ..

so don't stop write this lovely poems ..

Q8y*