Paradise of Love

[محمد أمين]

Paradise of love

Holding a rose on my Hand

And walking lonely on the Sand

Asking the sea about my lost love

About my girl ...... about my dove

Who will take me to fly to above

To fly to Paradise....to Paradise of love

I looked at the moon in the dark sky

I found him smiling....I didn't believe my eye

He told me wake up ... You're a dreaming guy

Wake up from your dream.....you're just living a lie

There is no paradise .... there is no love

There is no girls ...... there is no doves

Look at yourself ..... you'd loved before

You're heart was broken ..... you're really so poor

So Why do you want to love again??!!

Do you love Saddness??!! Do you wanna be insane??!!

I told him Shut up ..... I've to love again

If love is Insanity , I wanna be insane

Being without my love ... is really a real pain

I have to go now......To find my Dove

And then we'll fly .... To paradise of Love

[~ VITA ~]

الرد: Paradise of Love

WHAT A NICE WRITING !!

I liked it , very very much

maybe you should be a writer ! who knows maybe you'll be like shakespeare someday ! I know I gaved you hope , no need to say thanks ,, hehehe

A poem starts with a thought, an idea, or an emotion felt from the heart. Poems can be happy, or sad, deep-thinking or off the wall, humorous, or even maudlin. The choice is up to you and your imagination as to what you will create,,

Thanks for sharing your poem !

[محمد أمين]

الرد: Paradise of Love

Thank you Vita very very much for your nice words , I love writing poetry very much , I'm good at writing the sad romantic ones , thank you so much vita again for passing , and for your nice words

Best wishes

Mohamed ,

[walid51]

الرد: Paradise of Love

Thanks is nice one

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[محمد أمين]

الرد: Paradise of Love

Thanx so much Walid for passing and posting your replay

Best wishes

Mohamed

[حمد ظبياني]

الرد: Paradise of Love

is that song mohammed ?
it,s very nice words
thank you my best friend



( فَكَذَّبُوهُ فَنَجَّيْنَاهُ وَمَن مَّعَهُ فِي الْفُلْكِ وَجَعَلْنَاهُمْ خَلاَئِفَ وَأَغْرَقْنَا الَّذِينَ كَذَّبُواْ بِآيَاتِنَا فَانظُرْ كَيْفَ كَانَ عَاقِبَةُ الْمُنذَرِينَ ) يونس .

[محمد أمين]

الرد: Paradise of Love

is that song mohammed ?
it,s very nice words
thank you my best friend



( فَكَذَّبُوهُ فَنَجَّيْنَاهُ وَمَن مَّعَهُ فِي الْفُلْكِ وَجَعَلْنَاهُمْ خَلاَئِفَ وَأَغْرَقْنَا الَّذِينَ كَذَّبُواْ بِآيَاتِنَا فَانظُرْ كَيْفَ كَانَ عَاقِبَةُ الْمُنذَرِينَ ) يونس .

lol , No itis just thoughts that I write , I'm glad coz you like it , and thanks very very much for honouring this subject , and Ramadan Kareem

Mohamed