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  • محمد أمين
    عضو متألق
    • Sep 2003
    • 2582

    #1

    I Love you sweetheart

    Hello Everybody

    lastnight I finished my latest poem

    I called it "I love you sweetheart"

    itis talking about a person who was sitting alone at night who remembered his love story with the girl who was his princess one day , and he wished he could return to the past to love her again
    here itis , check it out




    Setting alone under the dark sky
    With sad tears on my Eye
    When the moon was looking at me with its pale light
    When no one was awake in that cold night

    When our love story was passing in front of my eye
    when you were the princess & I was your loving guy

    When I hold your hands which were like a piece of Art
    When I put 'em on my Chest to show you your place inside my heart
    When you smiled & said "I love you sweetheart"
    When I thought my life is paradise was just going to start


    I didn't know then my dream won't come true
    I didn't know then I would be away from you
    I thought the fate would be a friend for us
    But unfortunately It was like a mean foe


    I can't Believe how I would live without my sweet miss
    Who had tought me one day what the real love is
    My life is empty like blank verses without rhyme
    But honey , itis too late we have no time
    I really wish I could return to the past
    To Love you again Till I breathe my last
    Mohamed Amin
  • walid51
    عضو بارز
    • Mar 2003
    • 1869

    #2
    الرد: I Love you sweetheart

    Thanks a lot

    It is nice one

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    • محمد أمين
      عضو متألق
      • Sep 2003
      • 2582

      #3
      الرد: I Love you sweetheart

      thanx you so much bro walid for posting a replay


      with my best regards
      Mohamed Amin

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      • سمر22
        عضو فعال
        • Apr 2004
        • 356

        #4
        الرد: I Love you sweetheart

        Realy it's Wonderful

        I like it

        It has a strong power may be in the word or in the feeling >>>

        and this is the couse that let me like it >>>

        Best wishes
        smr.........
        لله أقدار وللأقدار مسارات .....فأن كان قدرنا أن لا نلتقي ..فليبقى الحب بيننا

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        • sadness forever
          عضو فعال
          • Feb 2005
          • 264

          #5
          الرد: I Love you sweetheart

          yeah man ,, its pretty strong one ,, what a words !!

          its great ,, and it has its powerfull

          thanks man ,,


          إذ لم تحترق أنت ..




          ولم أحترق أنا ..




          فمن أين يخرج النور ؟؟

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          • محمد أمين
            عضو متألق
            • Sep 2003
            • 2582

            #6
            الرد: I Love you sweetheart

            اضيف في الأساس بواسطة سمر22
            Realy it's Wonderful

            I like it

            It has a strong power may be in the word or in the feeling >>>

            and this is the couse that let me like it >>>

            Best wishes
            smr.........
            thanx so much samar , so glad coz you liked it
            thank you so much for passing and reading the poem

            with my best regards

            Mohamed
            Mohamed Amin

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            • محمد أمين
              عضو متألق
              • Sep 2003
              • 2582

              #7
              الرد: I Love you sweetheart

              اضيف في الأساس بواسطة sadness forever
              yeah man ,, its pretty strong one ,, what a words !!

              its great ,, and it has its powerfull

              thanks man ,,
              thanks alot sadness forever for your nice words ,

              and glad too coz u liked it

              with my best wishes

              Mohamed
              Mohamed Amin

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              • ام اي عزيزي
                عضو فعال

                • Mar 2005
                • 685

                #8
                الرد: I Love you sweetheart

                grammartically right
                logically right
                goooooood job
                i wish i can do like your poets

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                • محمد أمين
                  عضو متألق
                  • Sep 2003
                  • 2582

                  #9
                  الرد: I Love you sweetheart

                  thanx so much Dear M . A 3azizy for your replay , it reall cheers me up




                  thank you so much
                  Mohamed Amin

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