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    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته




    One day , I walked a lone under the rain

    I looked for some meanings

    While I was observing ,1

    A drop of water fell down



    With lots of her sisters

    Which were jumping happy

    Like pearls !!1

    Like shining diamonds !!1

    How romantic !! 1

    No , they weren't

    Actually , they rushed down

    like a waterfall of fear

    Like a dune of vague

    That destroy the way

    But the drop was still jumping

    Happy or afraid ??!!1

    I don't know !!1

    May be , it imitated my brain

    Which always jumps to reach your mind

    Through the obscurity fog

    But , always fail !! 1



    My own words

    I hope you like it



    حدّ السحاااااب و فوق روس الجباااالي و أنا جلالة الملكة %

  • #2
    الرد: A drop of water

    Majesty..
    YOU are a great girl.. Really you have a high feeling.. I liked your words and I enjoyed to read them..







    Best Wishes
    Katten...

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    • #3
      الرد: A drop of water

      Wow your majesty
      Sounds gr8
      Hay sister whatz up !!!
      I have written one, it's meaning is very close of yours. But in Arabic
      I'll try to post it soon.
      Keep writing your creative motion, I will keep tasting it, I promise.
      من كان منا بلا خطيئة فليجلس على اكتافنا

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      • #4
        السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

        اضيف في الأساس بواسطة katten عرض الإضافة
        Majesty..

        YOU are a great girl.. Really you have a high feeling.. I liked your words and I enjoyed to read them..






        Best Wishes

        Katten...

        I'm so happy to hear that from you honey

        حدّ السحاااااب و فوق روس الجباااالي و أنا جلالة الملكة %

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        • #5
          السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

          اضيف في الأساس بواسطة الوحيد عرض الإضافة
          Wow your majesty

          Sounds gr8
          Hay sister whatz up !!!
          I have written one, it's meaning is very close of yours. But in Arabic
          I'll try to post it soon.

          Keep writing your creative motion, I will keep tasting it, I promise.
          Really !! So , please , I wanna see it as soon as possible Prof

          حدّ السحاااااب و فوق روس الجباااالي و أنا جلالة الملكة %

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          • #6
            الرد: A drop of water


            As usual, you surprise us by your writing. It's nice

            and
            I liked this part



            اضيف في الأساس بواسطة جلالة الملكة عرض الإضافة
            Actually , they rushed down

            like a waterfall of fear

            Like a dune of vague

            That destroy the way

            But the drop was still jumping

            Happy or afraid ??!!1

            I don't know !!1

            May be , it imitated my brain

            Which always jumps to reach your mind

            Through the obscurity fog

            But , always fail !! 1



            with all the best

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            • #7
              السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

              Thanx a lot Crowny

              You always support me honey

              حدّ السحاااااب و فوق روس الجباااالي و أنا جلالة الملكة %

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              • #8
                الرد: A drop of water

                How nice! How beautiful!

                I liked most your use of water drops to show the flow of ideas from brain to brain.

                Water drops flow like emotions do..

                Wordsworth defines poetry as "The spontaneous flow of powerful feelings."

                So do your drops and feelings!!

                Nice piece, our Queen.
                فلا تكتب بكفّك غير شيء يسرّك في القيامة أن تراه

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                • #9
                  السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

                  I appreciate your admiration 'n comment

                  Thanx a lot your Majesty

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                  • #10
                    الرد: A drop of water

                    wow great your majesty

                    you always great

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                    • #11
                      السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

                      You always lovely sweety

                      Thanx for passing

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                      • #12
                        الرد: A drop of water

                        very great words i like your words always our queen
                        أنت عادة كتابية لا شفاء منها !!!!!!!

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                        • #13
                          السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

                          Thanx a lot my dear NooooooooooooooooooooooooooooR

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