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  • جلالة الملكة
    رد
    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

    Thanx a lot Crowny

    I hope u enjoy it

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  • The crown
    رد
    الرد: When u come !! love !! need me

    it's so nice to read from you.. well done
    I like the style you used
    here among the poem


    well done ,we wish to see more from you

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  • جلالة الملكة
    رد
    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

    Thanx your Majesty for your important comment

    But actually , my humble words are verse not poem 1

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  • His Majesty
    رد
    الرد: When u come !! love !! need me

    Dear Queen, 0

    Your poem is a reminiscent of some lines of classical love poem written by some English poets like: 0

    How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. 1
    I love thee to the depth and breadth and height 2
    My soul can reach . . . 3

    by Elizabeth Browning

    Some other lines in your poem like the closing lines

    Why are u lost , 1
    While my heart is waiting for u ??!! 1


    may respond to these lines by Hilda Doolittle

    Ah love is bitter and sweet, 1
    but which is more sweet 2
    the bitterness or the sweetness, 3
    none has spoken it. 4

    Good luck with writing poetry. Poets are the people who can decode unseen human emotions in visual words

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  • جلالة الملكة
    رد
    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

    Dana , Noor

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  • دانة بنت الكويت
    رد
    الرد: When u come !! love !! need me

    wow wow wow

    very beutiful words your majesty

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  • نور 2007
    رد
    الرد: When u come !! love !! need me

    Why are u lost , 1

    While my heart is waiting for u ??!!
    i like this part very much thank you very much our queen

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  • جلالة الملكة
    بدأ موضوع When u come !! love !! need me

    When u come !! love !! need me

    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته





    When u come closer , 1
    My poor heart feels so warm

    I hear music every where

    The universe dances

    The colors of rainbow dance

    Even people on streets , I see them dance !! 1


    When u say that u love me , 1

    No one dears to hurt me

    No obstacle stops my steps to top

    No more questions torture my mind


    When u need me , 1

    Life is green

    Dreams are truth

    Love is life

    Every body is so kind

    I love the all

    I forgive my enemies

    I wanna make everybody happy

    I'm gonna help who need to

    I'll give lots of charity


    I wanna love

    I wanna sing

    I wanna dance

    I really wanna dance now

    I love u

    Please , 1

    Don't ever stop saying it


    Carry me up

    Stay holding me strongly

    Don't leave me there with no wings

    Give my blood a madness overdose

    Break your fears , 1

    Non of them will change the fate

    Nor destroy the world

    Keep closer , allow us – u 'n me – live happy






    Why are u lost , 1

    While my heart is waiting for u ??!! 1


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    My own words

    I hope you like it


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