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  • Only Fate

    Hey Guys ,
    I finished a new poem , I hope you guys like it , I named it "only fate"
    and here it is



    Only fate put me there
    Just in order to see her
    To see that beautiful Girl
    To see that wonderful pearl


    Her beautiful eyes were wide and green
    THe most beautiful eyes....... I have ever seen
    Her Blond Hair was like Gold Chains
    Just look at it and u'll forget all your pains



    You are a white dove among black crows
    And in the Garden of life you are a beautiful rose
    Any other girl ofcourse I'll oppose
    Because you're the only one that I'm gonna choose

    But for some reasons .... I really had to leave
    And then I realised you were a big theif
    You stole my heart and my mind
    I love you so much ...really love is so blind
    I think about you wherever I go
    Tell me where you are...I wish I could know
    But I'm gonna find you ... yes I'm gonna do
    Honey , I love you so much
    yeah , I love you
    Mohamed Amin

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    الرد: Only Fate

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    رسمتك في عيون الشمس أشجارا متوجة بنهر حنان .. رسمتك واحة للعشق أسكنها .. وتسكنني ويهدأعندها قلبان ...

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    • #3
      الرد: Only Fate

      Thanks alot awtar al7zn for passing , I hope you liked the poem
      best wishes
      Mohamed
      Mohamed Amin

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        الرد: Only Fate

        your words really marvellous
        i will repeat really you are a poet
        thanks very much

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          الرد: Only Fate

          Thanks a lot

          My regards

          **********

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          • #6
            الرد: Only Fate

            Dear sweet tweety , thanx alot for your sweet replay , glad you liked the poem

            My dear bro. Walid , thanx alot for passing and your replay

            with my best wishes ,
            Mohamed
            Mohamed Amin

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            • #7
              الرد: Only Fate

              you have a good star. do you have any other similar poems. as an advise i would advise you to try to rheme your lines it is then more musical to the ear. good job.
              ONE NIGHT I HAD THE STRANGEST DREAM
              I NEVER DREAMED BEFORE
              I DREAMED THE WORLD HAD ALL AGREED TO PUT AN END TO WAR

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