Only Fate

[محمد أمين]

Hey Guys ,

I finished a new poem , I hope you guys like it , I named it "only fate"

and here it is

Only fate put me there

Just in order to see her

To see that beautiful Girl

To see that wonderful pearl

Her beautiful eyes were wide and green

THe most beautiful eyes....... I have ever seen

Her Blond Hair was like Gold Chains

Just look at it and u'll forget all your pains

You are a white dove among black crows

And in the Garden of life you are a beautiful rose

Any other girl ofcourse I'll oppose

Because you're the only one that I'm gonna choose

But for some reasons .... I really had to leave

And then I realised you were a big theif

You stole my heart and my mind

I love you so much ...really love is so blind

I think about you wherever I go

Tell me where you are...I wish I could know

But I'm gonna find you ... yes I'm gonna do

Honey , I love you so much

yeah , I love you

[أوتارالحزن]

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[محمد أمين]

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Thanks alot awtar al7zn for passing , I hope you liked the poem

best wishes

Mohamed

[sweet tweety]

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your words really marvellous
i will repeat really you are a poet
thanks very much

[walid51]

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Thanks a lot

My regards

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[محمد أمين]

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Dear sweet tweety , thanx alot for your sweet replay , glad you liked the poem

My dear bro. Walid , thanx alot for passing and your replay

with my best wishes ,
Mohamed

[Chocolate Manic]

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you have a good star. do you have any other similar poems. as an advise i would advise you to try to rheme your lines it is then more musical to the ear. good job.