((((المسابقة الأولى لأفضل قصة انجليزية قصيرة))))

[corvette777]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته..

اخواني الأعضاء الكرام ... يسر المنتدى الانجليزي باقامة مسابقة لأفضل قصة انجليزية قصيرة .. وهذه الأولى من نوعها... على أمل تنشيط المنتدى والاستفادة من خلال تلك المسابقة .. للاشتراك في هذه المسابقة عليك اتباع الآتي:

1- يمكنكم كتابة قصة من تأليفكم الشخصي .. ويمكنكم كذلك كتابة قصة من خلال الاستعانة من أحد المواقع على الانترنت او من اي وجه كان ولكن بشرط هام جدا وهو كتابة المصدر في كلا الحالتين ... وكل واحدة عليها نقاط
2- التنسيق والتنظيم والترتيب في كتابة موضوع القصة بمعنى ان القصة تشمل على تنسيق جيد من لون الخط وحجم الخط وغيره وان ينظم كتابته بطريقة جذابة وواضحة .. ايضا عليها نقاط
3- يحبذ أن تضعوا صور متناسبة مع موضوع قصتكم حيث تعطي لقصتك تأثير جذاب على القارئ وسوف ترفع من أسهمك كثير وهذا اللنك يوضح ما أقصده:

http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13586

ملاحظة:هذه كانت مسابقة شعر لقصيدة.. ولكن هذه مسابقة قصة
4- لكل من يريد الاشتراك.. فعليه أن يضع القصة في طرح مشاركة منفصلة ولكن عليه أن يكتب أن هذه القصة للمسابقة.. هذا شرط هام
5- لا تنسوا أن القصة تكون باللغة الانجليزية.. حتى لا يكون عند احد حجة
6- أن تكون القصة قصيرة وليست طويلة جدا... حيث يسهل قراءتها كلها
7- يسمح للمشرفين بالمشاركة بما فيهم مشرف المنتدى الانجليزي :grins:انا مستواي مثلكم او اقل
8- سيتم اختيار الفائز عن طريق تصويت جميع الأعضاء ...
9- والفائز سيحصل على لقب خاص به
10- مدة المسابقة غير محدودة.. ولكن عندما نتلقى مشاركات عديدة سيتحدد ذلك من خلال مشرف المنتدى



في حالة وجود اي استفسار أو حاجة الى مساعدة في أي شئ فأرجو عدم التردد ومراسلتي عبر بريد المنتدى وسوف يجدني دائما في خدمتكم
أريدكم أن تشتركوا جميعا .. نحن نهدف الى تنشيط المنتدى والا فسيتم حذفه... كل من يشترك سوف يساهم بشكل كبير في تحقيق تطوير المنتدى.. سارعوا بالاشتراك فقد تكون الفائز

مع تحياتي
مشرف المنتدى الانجليزي
كورفيت777

[rakan]

i like to join my story to the competion

my story in this link

http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=35423

rakan

[yasmeen]

Great idea corvettee

we would be so happy to partecipate

give us some time,and inshallah we will post our stories here

thump up

[corvette777]

Rakan, your story not accpeted to the competetion, I'm afraid.
Because First of all, you didn't write on it that it's for the contest. Second you must edit its color, font, suitable pictures, well arranged...etc We don't want to put a story and that's all. You must do the terms of the contest to accpet your participation. I'm sorry to say that. and If you want, you can copy ur story in a new thread and do all changes for it to be accpeted ... Thank you very much


My sis. Yasmeen
we need just alot of participations. after then, we can determine the endline of the contest... thanks to you

[Rock Road]

thank you corvette777

it's agood idea

I dont hv 1 at the moment from any where

but i will say 1 by my self

[corvette777]

Ok rock road... but I hope you will put it quickly and all other participations because we have a lot of things to do after this contest. You're welcome

[Rock Road]

قصة للمسابقة


The Story ::

the farmer : mazen : 54years old
the student : maged : 14years old
the father : yassen :44years old

____________________________________________The Start ___________________________________________
maged was studying in al-hasad school one day Mr.mazen told maged to help him in hi work but maged didn't hv any idea about this work , when he came back to home he told his father(yassen)
about the offer and his father(yassen) said its good u can help him , this work will help u in ur school . maged has been started work in the farm, and day after day he knew alot of things about plans, and when he studied scines it was very easy .
and when he had the certifecate he had a full mark in scines .
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I hope that it is good and good bye .

[corvette777]

Thanks R.R.

your story is good and I hope it will win at the contest

We got the first challenger

who else??

للتوضيح : يمكنكم وضع مشاركاتكم عبر الرد على هذا الموضوع وكتابة القصة كما قام الأخ روك رود أو كتابته في موضوع منفصل ولكن مع كتابة ان القصة للمسابقة .. وأمر آخر لا تنسوا كتابة المصدر سواء كان منكم شخصيا أم من احد المواقع او ايا كان... وشكر

[handsome boy]

good game

it will be a famous game and i will give my story soon

wait me corvette777

THX

[handsome boy]

قصة من تأليفي

قصة للمسابقة
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the story :-
mohammad : 16years old
ammar : 16years old
wael : 16years old
Drakola : 141years old
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there was 3 freinds there names were mohammad , ammar and wael , one day drakola came to them and he tried to kill to eat them but they was agroup and they have hurt the drakola but the drakola has tried again and again but his aim didnt happen,
then the drakola had an idea and his idea was to let them hate each other , after his idea has been happened , he start to kill them all . . . . .
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[Rock Road]

WoW

handsome boy

you are so good with your story

but you will not be the winner

but you can its so good 1 .

and I like it coz drakola is in it .

SooOOooo

GOOOD

THx

[اغلى هدية]

My story for the contest in this link

http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=36665

[corvette777]

السلام عليكم

اخواني الأعضاء أرجو منكم التوجه الى هذا اللنك

http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=36918

وآمل أن نرى المزيد من المشاركات في هذه المسابقة... أنا عن نفسي بدأت أكتب قصة ، وأتمنى من الجميع أن يطرح مشاركته وكما قلت يمكنك من خلال الاستعانة من المواقع ولكن شرط وهو ذكر المصدر وتحياتي للجميع

[rakan]

هذه القصة للمسابقة

the Writer: RAKAN

The Heros:
saleh-Rami-heidi-Ahmed

The resource: me

--------------------------my best friend -------------------------
i dont know what can i say but...in my restless dream he was there...my best friend ever..i will pay all what i have to seen him again..every time i try to forgot him but that was impossible

anyway my name is saleh and im 23 years old im study in army base im an enginering there and the story begin five years ago...

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------------------five years ago -----------------

i was in high school ( what we called in saudi arabia -secondary school) and my friend rami was with me since we begun to study at school .. we like each other as a brother.. all the school were called a twin because we had a lots of thinks were had the same in our action,our move,our dress...etc

but we had only one point is different and we had a problem ..that thing was a girl called (heidi) she was beauty girl ..the problem is we love her and we were compette(نتنافس)to her and some times we were fight for her

Ahmed...has known about the thing and he was our friend since high school..he advice to us to leave her alone and its wrong to think about that and its not a good time for that...but we were never listen to his advice

One day i saw Rami had a bad feeling and he was a looks a strange and he said to me after class to broke up this girl its very dengirous but i lughed and i said you lost the competion or you are give up already?

but he try his says and he swear about all what he says..but i didnt believe him ....... but...............

one day he was shoking a lot and alot and he....died .......no body tell me about the reason for his death...i was shocked and cried for him...i was think its maybe was a heartbeat or heartattack untill one day ... heidi want me to visit her at home...and i accept..i didnt know what was i do im shocked and i want to do anything to relaxing me...i want to her home

at her home i feel bad about something i dont know what is it ... she said she was sorry about my friend but i can let you forgot everything...and she gave me a small white thing and she said (smell and forgot) before i smell i asked about what that think she said (its a hero come on smell it) ...and i remeber what Rami said about her and i was thinking (hero .... hero.... ???!!!!! ..herowin!!!! oh my god!! its a drugs!!!!)i toss it she was scared from me and i was anger...all that love story for ....drugs???? i punch her and i told her to leave the school or call the police!!!

After That

i heared that she leave the town not just the school and my friend ahmed said(i told you before and i warn you but you never listen and the result..we lost a lovely friend)

Rami was died not just for drugs also he died with IDES

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That is the end for the story and i still love Rami and i love it after he died more that before i hope i can meet him one day and remeber all nice memory ... i thanks the god that he leave for me my friend Ahmed and now he is a doctor

I learn from Rami a good lesson ... i must choose corrctly the woman who is good that she can share my life

---------------THE END--------------------




rakan

[corvette777]

مشاركتي في هذا اللنك:

http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=37440

[بنت البحر]

story by: sea girl

here's a short story which i wrote long time ago i hope u like it, and it's not just a story it is my feeling as well



Sea... full of life , fishes , whales dolphins and maybe mermaids...
and the most important is that it's full of love...
I had a wonderfull time there with a SEA GIRL and her DOLPHIN...


Sea world is something super natural.. yup, i guess water is the basic for every thing.. and sea is more than just water!! it's life...
yup, there used to be a little girl who once fall of a ship in the middle of the sea.. she was very tiny that she couldn't swim.. but she was lucky, there was a Dolphin there to save her.. some how.. they maneged to live together under the sea..they had alot of fun.. but the tiny girl was always afraid from the day she would have to live away without that dolphin.. she was young and scared!! ... the dolphin nknew that his little freind is scared so he thought that if he left her with THE PEOPLE LIKE HER she'll be happy.. he didn't know how deep and how much he ment to her... once day he desided to leave her at the sea shore while she was asleep!!! ... i don't know if that tiny SEA girl woke up or yet... but all am afraid of is what's going to happen if she did and she didn't see the DOLPHIN there....

what do u think will happen next.... i really don't know!!!!!
c.g

[ملك السرعة]

الرد: ((((المسابقة الأولى لأفضل قصة انجليزية قصيرة))))

هذه القصة للمسابقة

The Famous Tree

A long time ago, there was a huge apple tree

....A little boy loved to come and play around it everyday

He climbed to the treetop, ate the apples, took a nap under the shadow

He loved the tree and the tree loved to play with him

Time went by...the little boy had grown up,

And he no longer played around the tree every day.

One day, the boy came back to the tree and he looked sad.

"Come and play with me ,” the tree asked the boy.

"I am no longer a kid, I do not play around trees any more"

The boy replied.

"I want toys. I need money to buy them."

"Sorry , but I do not have money...

But you can pick all my apples and sell them.

So, you will have money.

" The boy was so excited.

He grabbed all the apples on the tree and left happily.

The boy never came back after he picked the apples.

The tree was sad.

One day, the boy who now turned into a man returned

And the tree was excited "Come and play with me" the tree said.

" I do not have time to play. I have to work for my family.

We need a house for .

Can you help me?

" Sorry”,

But I do not have any house. But you can chop off my branches

To build your house.

" So the man cut all the branches of the tree and left happily.

The tree was glad to see him happy but the man never came back since then.

The tree was again lonely and sad.

One hot summer day,

The man returned and the tree was delighted.

"Come and play with me! " the tree said.

"I am getting old . I want to go sailing to relax myself.

“Can you give me a boat?"

“Said the man ”.

"Use my trunk to build your boat.

You can sail far away and be happy.

" So the man cut the tree trunk to make a boat.

He went sailing and never showed up for a long time.

Finally, the man returned after many years.

"Sorry, my boy . But I do not have anything for you anymore.

No more apples for you...

" The tree said”.

" No problem, I do not have any teeth to bite

" The man replied.

"No more trunk for you to climb on"

"I am too old for that now" the man said.

" I really cannot give you anything...

The only thing left is my dying root,”

The tree said with tears.

"I do not need much now, just a place to rest.

I am tired after all these years" the man replied.

"Good! Old tree roots are the best place to lean on and res t,

Come, come sit down with me and rest.

" The man sat down and the tree was glad and smiled with tears.


؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟ Do you know who is the tree














































This is you and the tree is your parent

[جلالة الملكة]

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

Brother ملك السرعة :

This is a very old competition - sory - I'll close it now . But - if you want - you can write your story in an independent topic and thanx a lot . Best wishes