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  • sadness forever
    عضو فعال
    • Feb 2005
    • 264

    #1

    check this out ,, my great words ..

    Asking For Forgiveness

    I wake up in the middle of the night
    So afraid of going back to sleep
    I walk and walk, following the light
    Yet kill it by the darkness down deep…

    Sweet words cut my throat
    Living in the state of denial
    A lot of hatred is to be sought
    Then comes my time to fall…

    And when I die, fall on the ground
    Will you cry for me?
    Will anyone hold me hand?
    I just hope you pray for me…

    Because I was just an innocent child,
    Who was forced to grow up too soon,
    Publicly I was crucified,
    My heart was replaced with stone…

    Sorry…
    For all I have said,
    For all I have done,
    For times I have spent,
    Hurting everyone…




    إذ لم تحترق أنت ..




    ولم أحترق أنا ..




    فمن أين يخرج النور ؟؟
  • محمد أمين
    عضو متألق
    • Sep 2003
    • 2582

    #2
    الرد: check this out ,, my great words ..

    they really are Great Words ,

    thanx so much for your beautiful poem , and keep up the good work

    my best wishes

    Mohamed
    Mohamed Amin

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    • sadness forever
      عضو فعال
      • Feb 2005
      • 264

      #3
      الرد: check this out ,, my great words ..

      thanks mohammad ,,, i hope u like it ,, its my only one in english ,,
      my best regard


      إذ لم تحترق أنت ..




      ولم أحترق أنا ..




      فمن أين يخرج النور ؟؟

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      • ام اي عزيزي
        عضو فعال

        • Mar 2005
        • 685

        #4
        الرد: check this out ,, my great words ..


        GooooooooD job
        don't go away

        be near and visit us here !

        http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?t=99813



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        • gina88
          عضو جديد
          • Feb 2005
          • 2

          #5
          الرد: check this out ,, my great words ..

          soooOo imperssive... really it touched me...good work

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