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  • CapitalX
    عضو جديد
    • May 2001
    • 8

    #1

    May U Can Help Me Pleas

    If U can plea schak my writing homework bcz i garra give it 2 my teacher 2moro ....
    1- spling
    2- grammer
    3- vocabulary
    4- about (, ) ( .) (?)(!) ..

    it is comparing between basket ball and football ...
    pleas do't ignore me ....



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    Basketball and football are similar sport games, but there are some important differences. Both games are very commons sports in all over the world, also they are both have ball, and the control in these games by referees, in addition, both contain about tow teams and all team have particular players, on the other hand, men and women can play these tow games and both of them are in local championships.

    There are several differences between these tow kinds of sports. Basketball uses a basket and it is played by hands, and her team should has five players active to play, and they play in back board, also the wining depended on points, in contrast, football is played by feet, and her team has eleven players, also they played on stadium, and the wining depended on goals.

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    thank u ...


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  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796

    #2
    I'm checking your subject dear... And then I will give you the result

    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

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    • corvette777
      عضو بارز
      • Jan 2001
      • 1796

      #3
      My Dear brother.... I checked your subject, and it was so perfect. It contains some mistaked in spelling , but the vocabulary and grammer were excellent ... so nice work

      the subject after some edits:

      Basketball and football are similar sport games, but there are some important differences. Both games are very commons sports in all over the world; also they are both having balled, and the control in these games by referees. In addition, both contain about two teams and every team have particular players, on the other hand, men and women can play these two games and both of them are in local championships.

      There are several differences between these two kinds of sports. Basketball uses a basket and it is played by hands, and it team should has five players active to play, and they play in back board, also the winning depended on points. In contrast, feet play football, and it team has eleven players, also they played on stadium, and the winning depended on goals .
      آخر تعديل بواسطة corvette777; 07-05-2001, 01:17 PM.
      SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

      سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

      {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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      • CapitalX
        عضو جديد
        • May 2001
        • 8

        #4
        THank u So much ....

        I am so glad 2 have chance that makes my writing checked by U..
        Thank U to give me this chance ...but I am very unlucky bcz , I did not have a few time 2 wait ur checking ...and I gave it 2 my teacher be4 U check it .... I hope 2 get good work ..Bcz me teacher is very strict ... he American teacher ....
        Thank U again ...
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        • corvette777
          عضو بارز
          • Jan 2001
          • 1796

          #5
          Oh Brother... I hope you will always can to ask us in any thing you want to know or to check..

          Regards
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