A poem About A girl :)

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  • Q8y
    عضو متألق
    • Feb 2001
    • 2092

    #1

    A poem About A girl :)



    A girl ..

    Like an angel u r and in my heart u will always be ..

    love u from the bottom of my heart bcz u r for me ..

    in my dreams u always be and in my eyes u live free ..

    i believe in ur love bcz i feel i born just to be with u ..

    let feel of life while u r close to me ..

    show me what does love mean while u r taking care of me ..

    let me live in ur heart so i can see who is me !

    let me be a ring in ur finger thats what i want to be ..

    all i want is to be close to u ..

    my love can u know what i want from u ?

    just a place in ur heart for me ..

    Q8y*
  • شيروود
    عضو فعال
    • Apr 2001
    • 222

    #2
    Q8y......(*-*)..


    "" let me live in ur heart so i can see who is me ! ""
    GOD Heavens.........keep going.......;

    your Language is rich & fully expressive...congratulations...

    Sherwood....
    من يرد الله به خـيـرا...يفقهه بالدين

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    • corvette777
      عضو بارز
      • Jan 2001
      • 1796

      #3
      Oh my god. God bless you Q8Y , that's amazing what you wrote, you proved that you are better than me by a levels . My dear Q8Y this was a great poem not just good .. I want you to write for us more,, bcz you have the big ability to write best poems (masha allah) so just keep writing and trying

      Best regards
      corvette
      SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

      سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

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      • angel_rose
        عضو فعال
        • Apr 2001
        • 78

        #4
        Hi Q8y..........

        beautiful.......
        is it your first attempt???


        "just a place in ur heart for me .. "

        Is that all you want?
        I can give you all that and more
        if you promised to be all that I adore......

        -----------------------------------------------------

        Thank you for sharing it with us..........



        There is only one me and there will never be another me
        so I must make me,
        the best me that could ever be

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        • Q8y
          عضو متألق
          • Feb 2001
          • 2092

          #5


          Thanks Guys for ur subbort , i feel happy now bcz u like it

          and i want to smile

          but when ever i write i think about eyes and i write about them

          , maybe bcz i love eyes more than anything , or maybe the eyes

          can show u if u r in love or not ?

          i really dont know but i still like to write about the eyes as i love to

          be in ur eyes

          Q8y*

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          • corvette777
            عضو بارز
            • Jan 2001
            • 1796

            #6
            Hey Q8Y....

            What is the secret of eyes?? ....Are you falled in love by seeing an eyes of girl??

            SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

            سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

            {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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            • Q8y
              عضو متألق
              • Feb 2001
              • 2092

              #7

              Bro Corvette

              it is only an admiration or it is just a good impression bcz eyes

              seems to be the first gate to the heart

              i dont want to be in love bcz am afraid that it will end with a

              broken heart ..

              so i just keep smiling and be on the safe side

              Q8y*

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