Hi there………

I would be happy to help you…….

I’ve tried to correct it and made it better………..


Smoking is the main cause behind many diseases such as: lung cancer, lung diseases, and many heart and arteries diseases.

Smoking is a waste of time and money. Smokers have to pay a lot of money for nothing everyday and not only that but they also waste their time as they sit smoking in coffee shops for many hours daily.

People usually don’t like smokers because they always smell of smoke (which is not a good smell) and they might lead one to learn this bad habit. There are many places where smokers are not allowed especially when there are children around.

(((The summary)))
Smoking is a bad habit and it has a lot of bad effects. It wastes time, money and endangers one’s health and that of the community.
I think if all people stopped smoking, our life would be much better and our environment would be much healthier.

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Wish you the best of luck

that was so sweet of you dear angel as usual

** dear CapitalX,,,, if you would listen to my advice ! i would say it's better to write full words than abbreviation all the time ,to master spelling which is very important in English

Regards and good luck

الأخوان الأعزاء في هذا المنتدى الراقي والمليئ بالأعضاء المحترمين والحريصين كل الحرص على مساعدة الأخوة أمثالي وبالأخص الأستاذين (موج وانجل روز)
واطلب منهم المعذرة لكتابتي باللغة العربيه في هذا المنتدا ولكن السبب هو انني افتقر لبعض الكلمات التبجيليه وتنقصني اساليب المدح بها لذلك اكتب البعربية والفرحة تملأ قلبي لوجود مثل هؤلاء الأعضاء ، واحب ان اخبرهم لطالما ساعدوني لطالما أود مكافئتهم وشكرهم على هذا العمل الرائع الذي يقومون به ...
الأخ انجل روز شكرا شكرا شكرا جزيلا على ردك السريع واتمنى لو استطيع ان ارد لك معروفك هذا في المستقبل ..
والأخ العزيز موج ان نصيحتك فعلا هي ما اشكو منه و اعدك ام شاء الله في المراة التاليه سوف اهتم بها كثير الأهتمام فهي ان لم تكن مهمه لما كتبتها يداك إمو تشلم لي يديك انت والأخ انجل روز



وشكرا مرة اخرى

But what about this topic sentences

i want to put this sentences as a topic sentences of my writing
but i am not sure if it work or not ...

The topic sentence :
Smoking is the main cause behind many diseases. Smoking is a waste of time and money. People usually don’t like smokers.


my teacher said : 1st sentence will be your 1se reasone
2nd sentence will be your 2nd reasone
3rd sentence will be your 3rd reasone

and i am asking you if it ok or not ..


thank you .....

Actually CapitalX...

I'm so sorry Mr.CapitalX that I late,,, I'm just now have seen this topic... and I want to thank angel rose for her help...

Good advice my sis Mouj

Sorry again

Hi Capital ..........

First, there is no need for any thanks......I've tried to help you the best I can and I'm glad to be of any help.

العفو......
تسعدني مساعدتك...........و لا داعي للشكر .......الناس لبعضها .......



As for your topic or intoductory statements..........I'd prefer using connective words between the sentences as writing them in that manner make them sound like a telegram.
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It is well known that smoking is the main cause behind many diseases but it is also a huge waste of time and money. In addition to all that, alot of people do not usually like smokers (or smokers are not well-liked by many / or a lot of people)

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I hope I have managed to help you......