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  • محمد أمين
    عضو متألق
    • Sep 2003
    • 2582

    #1

    You are like The Air I breathe

    The Last poem I wrote for my love , I finished it last week , I hope you guys like it


    YOU ARE LIKE THE AIR I BREATHE







    Setting alone under the dark sky

    With sad tears spangling on my eye
    Weeping on a bank of a beautiful river
    Living in sadness for now and forever

    Suddenly I saw a shooting star
    I asked her , Could you guide me to my true love?
    To my sweet princess


    To my life's laugh



    I'm seeing her sitting alone
    looking hopeless at the moon
    Her tears are pouring accross the silver light
    waiting for you....for her brave knight

    Take your horse and run to there
    Find your princess and never leave her
    Take her and never stop except at love's stage
    And lock yourselves at it's golden cage

    I took my horse and I searched for my girl
    and I found her , I found a sweet pearl
    I got off my horse and I ran towards her
    then I stopped and do nothing but just stare

    she was like a beautiful breeze
    she was like a precious treasure
    she was like a white dove
    making the universe full of pleasure

    Katie , You're like the Air I breathe
    Nothing in the world is precious like you princess

    You taught me what the real love is
    I'll always love you till I meet my death










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    آخر تعديل بواسطة محمد أمين; 06-09-2005, 02:16 AM.
    Mohamed Amin
  • الأرق
    عضو فعال
    • Aug 2005
    • 481

    #2
    الرد: You are like The Air I breathe

    [quote=محمد أمين]
    The Last poem I wrote for my love , I finished it last week , I hope you guys like it



    YOU ARE LIKE THE AIR I BREATHE




    You taught me what the real love is
    I'll always love you till I meet my death



















    wonderful

    i kile your words very much it just like a tone in my head


    your words take me to my

    last memory

    i can not remmber any more

    i do not know where is the truth

    where is the real love



    best regards

    sleepless























































































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    • عاشقة المحيطات
      عضو فعال
      • Jul 2005
      • 332

      #3
      الرد: You are like The Air I breathe

      Hello my brother mohammad,
      i like your poem specialy your expression,its wonderful word..
      thanks....
      my best wishes:
      ocean lover

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      • ziadmasry
        عضو
        • Sep 2005
        • 24

        #4
        الرد: You are like The Air I breathe

        Dear Mohamed,
        really delicate words touching something in feelings. Please read my little poem in Free talk

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        • corvette777
          عضو بارز
          • Jan 2001
          • 1796

          #5
          الرد: You are like The Air I breathe




          Mohamed Ameen

          This is verrry wonderful poem... god bless you Mohamed... it really touched my heart....the words are so meaningful .... keep it up and looking for more from you ....

          Aziz






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          • walid51
            عضو بارز
            • Mar 2003
            • 1869

            #6
            الرد: You are like The Air I breathe

            It is very nice one

            Thanks a lot

            My regards

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            • sweet tweety
              عضو فعال
              • Apr 2006
              • 143

              #7
              الرد: You are like The Air I breathe

              ....................really it is fantastic
              ................you are a poet
              ..thanks very much

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              • محمد أمين
                عضو متألق
                • Sep 2003
                • 2582

                #8
                الرد: You are like The Air I breathe

                thanks alot for all of you for the sweet replays and the lovely words

                with my best wishes ..

                Mohamed Amin
                Mohamed Amin

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