hello im a new member here , but i know the forum
but you have to excuse my english
maybe its not very good, and thats why im here
i think this forum will help me to improve it
well, im a palestinian girl 16 years old
and i want you all to look at my writing and tell me what do you think
i hope to get mohammad amin's comment
because he is veeeeeeery great
ill leave you with ............. palestine
Palestine … what is it? Is it a nation? I heard a lot about it, some say it is a tragedy, some say it is superstition. But what do you think? What do I think? What do Palestinians think? . I'll tell you what do we think, we don't think. We know it is a fact. It is our land. We need no one to govern us, we are not xenophobia. No we just want to rule ourselves; we just want our right to live. Is that impossible? No it is not, we will summon up all the strength we got, and all the power we got to make our aspiration come true. We will attack the occupation. It is not a conflict anymore; it is a game of truth and dare. An Israeli vampire came to sip our blood, to take our land away. It is irrational to let him go with that, he is just a Satan, fugitive, superstitious assassin want to take our land, but no we will not betray Palestine, we respect all the heroes who fed the land with their blood. He kills we bring others, because we have the fighters in the mothers uterus, we don't need a writ to make our nation, because we Palestinian are already a nation in our hearts.
but you have to excuse my english
maybe its not very good, and thats why im here
i think this forum will help me to improve it
well, im a palestinian girl 16 years old
and i want you all to look at my writing and tell me what do you think
i hope to get mohammad amin's comment
because he is veeeeeeery great
ill leave you with ............. palestine
Palestine … what is it? Is it a nation? I heard a lot about it, some say it is a tragedy, some say it is superstition. But what do you think? What do I think? What do Palestinians think? . I'll tell you what do we think, we don't think. We know it is a fact. It is our land. We need no one to govern us, we are not xenophobia. No we just want to rule ourselves; we just want our right to live. Is that impossible? No it is not, we will summon up all the strength we got, and all the power we got to make our aspiration come true. We will attack the occupation. It is not a conflict anymore; it is a game of truth and dare. An Israeli vampire came to sip our blood, to take our land away. It is irrational to let him go with that, he is just a Satan, fugitive, superstitious assassin want to take our land, but no we will not betray Palestine, we respect all the heroes who fed the land with their blood. He kills we bring others, because we have the fighters in the mothers uterus, we don't need a writ to make our nation, because we Palestinian are already a nation in our hearts.
, and we will be so happy to help you , I'll check this passage and I'll colour the corrected words, by the way I loved this words 
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