Who are you? مشاركتي للمسابقة الشعرية الثالثة

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  • نزيف الروح
    عضو
    • Mar 2001
    • 49

    #1

    Who are you? مشاركتي للمسابقة الشعرية الثالثة


    This is my poem for the contest .

    who are you?




    ^**^ who are you? I don't know my love who I'm
    and why I came from there to here*^^*
    ^**^ don't ask me to not be in sadness
    because i want to be in sadness *^^*
    ^**^ who are you? oh.. from your question
    from the secrets fance in my heart that come near*^^*

    ^**^ don't play wiht the fire to not burn you
    or break what my dream fantasy built*^^*
    ^**^ I'm night of await and tears of traveling

    ^**^ from the oasis that had home
    I don't live in the way I like and want*^^*
    ^**^ and you ask me who are you?
    your question shacked me my love*^^*
    ^**^ I swear I don't know my love who I am
    all i know it that i love you more than*^^*
    ^**^ anything and everything


    نزيف الروح





    لقد نسيتي أن تكتبي ملاحظة داخل الموضوع وليس في العنوان.. ونحن نعذرك على نسيانك.. لقد تم تعديل هذا الأمر
    آخر تعديل بواسطة corvette777; 24-06-2001, 05:12 PM.
    وعلم انك بلسم تشفي الجروح...
    وان وصفتك ابغي اكثر من لسان...
  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796

    #2
    My sis. Nazief Elroah...

    I would like to register my full admiration of your romantic poem... It's so beautiful... You can beat all the participations by it... Hope you the best
    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

    سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

    {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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    • angel_rose
      عضو فعال
      • Apr 2001
      • 78

      #3


      My dear Sis .......{Nazief}

      How are you?

      This is so lovely.........

      I enjoyed it alot........and loved it.........

      I have loved this line in particular

      "I'm night of await and tears of traveling "


      ***********************
      There is only one me and there will never be another me
      so I must make me,
      the best me that could ever be

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      • Q8y
        عضو متألق
        • Feb 2001
        • 2092

        #4
        Hello all

        Go0d Luck Nazief alrouh in the contest (*-*)

        am just wonder where u guys brought this fantastic images from !

        from ur poem i hope u will not be sad and i hope sadness won't

        know the way to ur heart , just peace happiness and love ..

        u take care dear ..

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        • نزيف الروح
          عضو
          • Mar 2001
          • 49

          #5
          Dear corvette777...

          A big thank for your support .. i'm glad because u like my poem
          وعلم انك بلسم تشفي الجروح...
          وان وصفتك ابغي اكثر من لسان...

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          • نزيف الروح
            عضو
            • Mar 2001
            • 49

            #6
            my sweet heart angel_rose

            thank u for these nice word which let me feel happy.. if my poem is beautiful your poem is wonderful i wish for you the best in the contest..
            وعلم انك بلسم تشفي الجروح...
            وان وصفتك ابغي اكثر من لسان...

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            • نزيف الروح
              عضو
              • Mar 2001
              • 49

              #7
              My brother Q8y...

              thanks for your nice words and about the images ..just search in the most famous sites such as yahoo or webshots and you will find what ever you want..
              وعلم انك بلسم تشفي الجروح...
              وان وصفتك ابغي اكثر من لسان...

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