(((The part 2 of - The word of life "I LOVE YOU")))) <<< For contest

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  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796

    #1

    (((The part 2 of - The word of life "I LOVE YOU")))) <<< For contest

    Hi Every body... I have the complement of last poem of mine... ((The poem for contest))





    ***I carried the letter and I hugged it to my chest***
    ***My heart was beating fast, I stayed remembering her***
    ***I remembered her beauty simple face & her fascinating charm***
    ***I was looking forward to back and see her once again***
    ***I have assured her feeling towards me; she has animated my heart once again***
    ***I feel now, the world begun lighten & brighten***
    ***I feel now that I came back presently again***




    ***I haven't saw this gloomy darkness anymore, I have advanced***
    ***It was the happiest air trip to me at all***
    ***I was wishing if this plane was mine, so I could back to her***
    ***Backing to her with love loaded & faithfulness***
    ***Backing to her & my heart full by fondness and ardent love***
    ***Yes, I have spent beautiful days with you, it fill it by the memories***
    ***What is the more beautiful than to love a person because the great memory of days!!***
    And what is the more beautiful than to be your memory provenience your love forever!!



    ***I arrived to my country &in my hand the most expensive letter***
    ***I didn't feel craving to my country at all as I feel it to meet my lover again***
    ***My family has came to meet me & I saluted them, my mind was away at this time***
    ***I came back to the house thinking how to meet her once again?***
    ***How I will convince my family & what I will say to travel once again!***
    ***The vacation still long, remained on school to start a month***


    ***I have insisted on my dad to send me to learn English again***
    ***I told him that I will do pay all fees by myself***
    ***I told him that my English lesson this time would be different from last times***
    ***This time the lesson will be kept on my mind forever, and it will be the first step to success way***


    It could to be countinued
    آخر تعديل بواسطة corvette777; 26-06-2001, 02:16 PM.
    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

    سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

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  • angel_rose
    عضو فعال
    • Apr 2001
    • 78

    #2


    Hi dear corvette.........

    How r u?


    Wow..........wow.............
    I have loved the poem.........
    Ah.......I guess my heart pounds with it...........

    You have a lovely ending here....
    You want to learn a new lesson.......different than all the others...
    and you will keep it in your heart, your mind, and your soul........forever.....quite a lesson.......who would ever forget such a lesson.......

    Take care..........

    *************************
    There is only one me and there will never be another me
    so I must make me,
    the best me that could ever be

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    • Q8y
      عضو متألق
      • Feb 2001
      • 2092

      #3
      Hi Mr.Corvette

      how ya doin Lover* ?

      really so romantic poem and very lucky letter that u huged !!

      beautiful images made me laugh loudly ..

      u r great lover ..

      wish u the best ..

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