OK these poems have been published in a book ^_^
I'm not claming they're good or anything but I would like reviews if possible.. I tried writing poems in Arabic but I'm not that good. I can only write stories in Arabic but meh. i'll get to it soon

here's the first one:



He hadn't closed his eyes today
Though the moon rose high
And Autumn leaves the scarlet leaves
Under the starlit sky
my eyes draw on the winter snow
With tears and fear and pain
A picture of a man with opened eyes
that will not close again
The eyes that lived on a hope
those eyes that died in vain
His eyes were killed by a sparkling hope
under the winter rain
But hope is gone
Death'd had his turn
And hope and death are one
for us who never learn!


The second one:

Naked childhood

No words can describe the little solitary eyes
Weeping thoughts wrapped up inside
Tormented dreams forbidden to grow
Begging for a life, begging for mercy
Desirous for the good that's left
blooming with thoughts of darkness
18 winters never dried your eyes
Cursed from birth
Forgotten, abandoned rolling in pain
Don't ask what's become of this world
preying on the weak of naked childhood
Don't ask where's the God you've prayed for
Wretched you are from your birth
Your frail body rotting in silence
A constant reminder of who we are
Of our hearts that beat for a parade of war
But fail to see the world from your eyes
Yes it's true we left you to die
Forgive us all for simple not trying!

and lastly but not leastly (or leastly..meh whatever)

Remember

Remember me with the winds that blow
And do not shed a tear
Remember me with the winter snow
When I am no longer here
Remember me with the million eyes
That shine into the night
remember me as the fire flies
Fall down with their light
Make what you can out of this life
Remeber,things aren't what they seem
As the whole sad earth's made out of strife
But wrapped inside a dream
Doesn't matter how far you get
Life's but a trial!
Remember me and do not forget
Remember me with a smile

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also may I remind you all that all of the poems are copyrighted so don't attemot to re-post or publish without permission not that you're gonna do it