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  • بنت البحر
    عضو جديد
    • May 2002
    • 5

    #1

    peoms!!

    there's so many peopl who love writting poem am one of them coz i do write so stuff i just want u to tell me what u think of some of the things i wrote !!
    ALL BY: ME

    once I saw a bird
    while i was looking for a shilter
    it took me under it's wings
    and after it i didn't have to wonder
    it was something strong, wonderful
    shining, noisy like a thunder
    one day the bird left

    i was helpless
    i waited every day
    the minute he took me away
    i waited and waited
    but ever since
    i never saw the birdi
    which led me home one day



    Girl



    she was a tiny girl
    with her little mouth
    with her little face
    she wanted to be something
    she wanted to be a star
    she made the way heaven
    but she didn't reach that far
    she needed a lover... she needed a hand
    she wanted to be happy and yes she was
    she needed more,,,
    and more...
    maybe she's creedy
    maybe she fall in love
    she might be dreaming
    she might be not
    but who ever could know that
    at least I don't?!!!





    Mars & I



    Just looked at the sky

    and I wondered why it's so high

    I thought maybe coz of the moon

    and maybe from the stars

    they're so valuable maybe that's why

    our sky is so high

    so I said ok, I'll look here & there

    I read about Mars

    and I wondered where it was

    I know it's up above

    there some where

    and I looked back at the sky

    wishing it to be not that high

    don't ask me ask me why

    I'll tell u why

    I just thought that maybe, or I guess

    i wanted to reach something up there

    no not the stars , not the moon

    with it shiny lights

    only my red planet

    My Mars

    and I knew right then

    that it was

    from the start

    just me & my Mars



    What it was



    Call it what ever

    just hope it last for ever

    call it crazy

    call it nuts

    but always love me

    and have some trust

    call it friend ship

    call it insane

    I loved a Dolphin

    within it's full of pain

    call it stupid

    call it crap

    call it dream

    but I'll make it fact


    ??question mark??



    He was walking , talking...

    alone...

    in the street...

    He was singing..

    she loved the ocean

    she loved the sea

    she loved a Dolphin

    but

    did she love me?


    so what do u think
    c.g
    النور في قلبي وبين جوانحي
    فعلام أخشى السير في الظلماء
  • مـــكـــس
    موقوف
    • Jun 2002
    • 1153

    #2
    tank you




    on this




    story


    كله مزح ترني ما أعرف شئ في الإنجليزي

    وعلى العموم الله يعطيكي العافيه


    مكس

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    • yasmeen
      عضو متميز
      • Oct 2001
      • 6284

      #3
      What do we think !!!

      wallahi they r great , i liked the second one so very much

      thank u so very much for the nice poems sis

      ur doing a great job

      thump up

      and all respect to u
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