خاطره انجليزيه ,,,,,,,,,

**corvette777** · 08-10-2002, 04:42 PM

My sis Reem Alkhlaleej!!!

Your words are very simple but it's really with strong feeling. We all need someone say to us "I love you" but the most important is the way or the steps to say or to hear this word... I liked your little poem , but you have one spelling mistake:
nedded= needed

**yasmeen** · 08-10-2002, 06:32 PM

Nice ,sweet poem Reem

lsn sis , what about writing it this way :

I dont want let you go ...... So Iam stay in your way .....

i wont let you go,so im staying in your way

I never nedded any one like Ineded you .......

i never needed any one like i need you

Today ,,, you have to say the word( I LOVE YOU ) you haye shout

you have to shout it

it one You have to say lmpresed

i didnt understand this last part

its so simple and nice,and its challenging and has a high spirits

keep the good writing

**m&ms** · 08-10-2002, 06:41 PM

THANX IT IS A NICE

BUT DID U WRITE IT URSELF ?

**بسمله** · 08-10-2002, 06:46 PM

thank you my friend

**الوحيد** · 08-10-2002, 08:58 PM

will done sis.

it is really impressive words.

plz always be with us.

**ميرامار** · 09-10-2002, 06:50 AM

Hi Reem

Very beautifull words,,,,,and sweet feelings,,,,keep it up my sis...

By the way yasmeen,,I think this sentence"so im staying in your way " should be " so I'm staying in your way" because:

1. after "am" the verb should come in it's gurend form,,I mean the verb+ing,,,so it must be "I'm staying" or you can say " I stay"

2. In my opinion,Reem wants to show her intention (نيتها) to stay with her lover,,,,so in this case as I learnt,,, we use present continous tense to express intention.....

أقصد أن الفعل يجب أن يكون في زمن المضارع المستمر عند الرغبة في إظهار نية القيام بعمل ما و يتكون المضارع المستمر من:
am,is,are+verb+ing

Please correct me if I'm mistaken...

My Best Regards

**yasmeen** · 09-10-2002, 07:49 AM

well done meramar

no you are 100% right, but it seems u were talking about reems original sentence,coz the correction ive written is the same of what uve said :embar: :embar:

i copied her sentence and wrote the correction under it

plz ,if there is more to be corrected go on, im sure reem would like it to make her poem perfect and with no mistakes

many many thanx meramar

**ميرامار** · 09-10-2002, 11:33 AM

OoOoOopssssss,,,,,Yasmeen you really have corrected the sentence

I'm sorry dear, I didn't notice that,,,,,any way I've added a clarification

**ريم الخليج** · 10-10-2002, 06:56 PM

شكرا جزيلا

thanks for the reply

with all my subject

**ريم الخليج** · 10-10-2002, 07:01 PM

Life without friendship....

وكل من شارك موضوعي له مني كل التقدير

اختكم ريم

**ريم الخليج** · 13-10-2002, 09:42 AM

its for the all

thank you

**m&ms** · 15-10-2002, 01:57 AM

hi reem how r u ?

SURE WHY NOT

AND BYTHEWAY I LIKE UR NEW SIGNATOR

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