Love & be "Loved"

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  • benazouz
    عضو جديد
    • Dec 2002
    • 5

    #1

    Love & be "Loved"

    (Whoever wants to be loved should forgive others)

    I DON'T THINK OF YESTERDAY
    LET'S TO THINK WHAT IS TODAY
    SUN COMES, ALWAYS, BRAND-NEW
    WHY TO SEE SUN AS GREY

    I LOVED YOU, SAME AS YOU ARE
    I BEG YOU KEEP YOUR PAST AWAY
    I DON'T ASK, I DON'T CARE
    NOBODY IS BLAMELESS EVERYDAY

    HEART IS OPEN, COME AND SHARE
    I NEED TO HEAR YOU, JUST SAY
    TOMORROW IS COMING AS A SHINY DAY
    I LOVED YOU TOO, LET'S PRAY


    BEN AZOUZ
    حياكم الله - " بن عزوز "
    ص ب "6" الزور 66051 الكويت
  • yasmeen
    عضو متميز
    • Oct 2001
    • 6284

    #2
    very nice benazouz

    really great words i enjoyed reading it

    BUT i think this sintence has some thing wrong :

    LET'S TO THINK WHAT IS TODAY

    i dont know,doesnt sound right

    but still a very nice poem, thump up

    and welcome to the english forum , we are glad to be having u with us brother .
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