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  • محمد أمين
    عضو متألق
    • Sep 2003
    • 2582

    #1

    My poems..... Check 'em out

    Hi guys ,

    I made a new poetry part in my site , and I put in it my first 3 poems , check 'em out and tell me what you think , I'll put the fourth one as soon as I finish it , best wishes



    i hope you enjoy it
    Mohamed Amin
  • KenMasters
    عضو فعال
    • Jul 2004
    • 146

    #2
    This is my poem poetry ...just look it

    Roses r red violets are blue
    but nothing is as sweet as you...

    you are my heart you are my soul
    you make me lose all control

    you are so nice you are so kind
    you make me become blind

    when i saw you like dream became true
    then i realized & Fallen in love with you

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    • محمد أمين
      عضو متألق
      • Sep 2003
      • 2582

      #3
      الرد: My poems..... Check 'em out

      Roses are Red ...... Violets are blue
      Thanks kenny......Thank you
      Mohamed Amin

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      • عربية
        عضو فعال
        • May 2003
        • 857

        #4
        الرد: My poems..... Check 'em out

        but how could you find her if you did not become insane


        any way
        it is wonderful

        I really enjoyed it
        أنا البحر في أحشائه الدر كامن ~ ~ ~ ~ فهل سألوا الغواص عن صدفاتي
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        • محمد أمين
          عضو متألق
          • Sep 2003
          • 2582

          #5
          الرد: My poems..... Check 'em out

          lol , thanx for your replay , I'm happy coz you enjoyed it
          Mohamed Amin

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