when you love someone.......(قصة رومانسية رائعة)

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  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796

    #1

    when you love someone.......(قصة رومانسية رائعة)

    PLEASE READ THIS STORY CAUSE IT'S NICE

    when i saw her **** i realized she isn't from here
    she is not arabian **** but she has a big power
    she has own attractive **** I never have met like her
    I insist to know where she from**** i really don't know why I care
    I necessary to do that**** i searched for her address
    she is foreign i don't care ***** i travelled in her town
    i lived in her town ***** i will stay in her town i don't care
    i searched for a place to live in***** i found good i can now stay in
    i threw everything&went to bed****** I just thinking in of her
    i woke up and sun is rise& smiling**** this day will be long
    now I have to look out of her**** i came here just to see her
    I asked for her school's place****so I can study with her
    yeah, i found it quick**** i entered to register in her class
    now I'm so happy *** i now assured that i'll see her
    oh, i have to wait one week more**** the term will start at next week
    no problem, i will be patient**** i went out& tour in her town
    i imagined that she is walking there**** I imagined that she's touring with me
    I waited one day, twice, thirth****I really look forward to meet her
    now I have one day left****one day to start the new term of school
    I felt scarely**** I fear from this different life
    I realized that i'm lonely in this strange country**** I will have to depend on myself
    i tried to sleep early**** I couldn't , i was thinking of tomorrow
    tomorrow will be the first****day in this foreign school
    tomorrow i will see**** the person who steals my mind
    stole my mind faraway**** to let me runaway
    it's 7:00 a.m. now, wow**** i'm ready to went to school
    I arrived there, my legs were quake**** I entered my class
    then I looked around **** I still rememberher face
    I still remember her breaty eyes***** her blonde hair
    I looked around for 5 minutes**** suddenly she opened the class's door
    oh How beautful she was**** she surrounded by a light
    her light was so brightness***** in this time I wished her
    does she know How much I care of her**** does she know I travelled in particular to see her
    I must tell her now my feeling***** she is my queen in my eyes
    she is all my life***** I leaved my country, family and money
    I will start my life with her***** but I must tell her
    I don't want to study and tiring myself***** I just do that to be with her
    I have to be a brave ******to confess to you my dear
    I will confess to you this day night***** i will date with you one day'
    I met her in the school**** I said hi she said hi
    I said please I need talk with you****** she said ok
    I told her that***** i wanna met her night at sea
    I choiced the sea because***** it's romantic place to confess your feeling
    and we met at sea****** I told her that i living here in this town because you
    I left my real life ***** cause I saw my best in you
    let me to call you lovely***** you made me crazy of you
    lovely look up at sea ***** and listen to me carefully
    whenever you see the sea***** you feel big rest and some ardent love
    listen at the waves ****and up a voice love music
    then sleep and dream a romatic dreaming**** dream to be with your soulmate
    dream to be with person love you so***** care about you so
    lovely that isn't an imaginaton****** that's is me
    lovely close your eyes and try to move***** you will can't
    that's me if you will refuse me****** lovely if someone asked what is ugliest murder in history
    answer &say that's me if***** i won't win you
    answer &say that's me if***** i won't win you
    you are my fondness& what my brain has drew
    and nobody will captured my *****heart except you
    when I saw your eyes***** I found myself here in your town with you
    if you live in moon ***** I'm ready to went with you
    lovely I really need you***** i need protiens, calcium, fats,etc
    but I will stop it***** because all that stuff included in you
    then i silent, I wited her response***** then i looked on her eyes
    her tears were fall on her cheek******she looked at me& she hugged me
    she hugged me for along time***** I felt myself as a bird
    as bird can fly and has his******own freedom to go to anywhere
    I feel that I don't want anything***** she is between my hand
    .................... THE END.....................


    so what do you thing???


    آخر تعديل بواسطة corvette777; 11-06-2001, 05:50 PM.
    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

    سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

    {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM
  • نزيف الروح
    عضو
    • Mar 2001
    • 49

    #2

    corvette777

    .
    well...what i think..!!!!


    coooooooooooooool is the perfect word for discraiping this lovely story.....wooooooow i really like it....well done



    my brother would you do a favor for me????please
    becaouse i nearly enter the clup ..i'd like you to send me when ever any body wrote anything in English forum..



    thanks
    your sis
    وعلم انك بلسم تشفي الجروح...
    وان وصفتك ابغي اكثر من لسان...

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    • Q8y
      عضو متألق
      • Feb 2001
      • 2092

      #3
      Hello dear,

      it is a nice poem and u r a go0od poet also , i like it so much , so i took i copy of this poem for me ..

      i hope u will not mind to do that !

      Q8y*

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      • corvette777
        عضو بارز
        • Jan 2001
        • 1796

        #4
        Nazief Elrouh !!!!

        Thank you dear ... I actually don't know how I wrote it... It's a deep feeling and imagination in my mind.... Thanks nazief .. about your request ... Don't worry I will send you whenever there are a new topics


        My brother Q8Y!!!!

        Of course I don't mind that's honor (شرف) for me to copy my poem's story,,, هل لهذه الدرجة الموضوع حلو؟؟

        الصراحة انا في قمة سعادتي طالما أن الموضوع نال حسن اعجابكم ولم أكن اتوقع هذا الرد ...أشكركم جزيلا ، اشكركم من كل قلبي أعزائي...
        SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

        سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

        {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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        • Q8y
          عضو متألق
          • Feb 2001
          • 2092

          #5


          The story has been Copied and now it is stored already in my

          heart ..

          waiting for the second part of this story or poem , or i can call it

          this beautiful shinning star ..

          Q8y*

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          • corvette777
            عضو بارز
            • Jan 2001
            • 1796

            #6
            Thank you Q8Y of your words....

            and about this story ..it finished, but anyway i will write a new poem soon and I hope it will be better than this one...

            so keep in touch

            corvette
            SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

            سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

            {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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            • Q8y
              عضو متألق
              • Feb 2001
              • 2092

              #7

              You r welcome Corvette

              even if this beautiful poem finished , am sure u have more in ur

              mind and u will share it with us ..

              all members of this forum visit this place just bcz of ur

              wonderful words ..

              so don't stop write this lovely poems ..

              Q8y*

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