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  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796

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    Thinking about you all time "new poem" m


    Hi Everyone....
    This is my latest poem.... for my number 1 in my life... for the one who really make my whole life different... made me feel and see how is the world is so beautiful around us... I can say she is the only only who believed in me and I say to her I love you so much.. and I dedicate this poem for you and sharing it with this amazing forum where I grew up and I hope everyone will like it




    Sometimes I feel like I am alone


    I don't see ppl bcz they are gone


    I have my car takes me to many zone

    lonely was my life I can't make further zoom

    Even if I try to call somebody or make a phone


    I still alone like hiding behind big stone


    But I enjoy my time and I smile bcz you're soon


    Rere, is the name I am holding inside me


    Rere is the flag in my heart keep me on


    Then when it wonders, no place to stay except ur home


    If I close my eyes for moments, I see you in my dream


    Everything I am surrounding, isn't like as it seem


    My mind takes me away, my heart asks urs to join team


    Thinking about you all time, wanting to know how you been


    Even if thousands tell me hi, I don't answer bcz I'm mean


    I love you rere, I shout it to all international screen


    My voice might be unreachable although I'm scream


    I'm dreaming about you, it doesn't matter how many mile


    All I want is to see ur face happy and always smile


    Remembering me inside your frame with my same style


    Trying to do many things, but I can't be liar


    Telling you fake facts is my ZERO desire


    My name is AZ, I am not crazy, hold my wire


    my feelings to you increace everyday like a fire


    to continue my life to the greatest power


    I don’t know if I am dreaming that you're my lover


    I want open my eyes and see you in my right position


    Nothing to worry about after all my ambition


    You are the one in my life I don't have to do repetition


    After your admission to my heart is done, you are my ultimate mission


    I'm missing you like continue my study with no tuition


    My love for you reaches the sky, it hard to describe or mention


    You are the light in my eyes gives me clear direction


    You are the map I am walking by, you're my intuition


    Attention everyone, attention plz, rere do you listen


    I love you rere so much, I love you in every part and section


    If I need someone's help, no doctor would help me for a session


    For telling me if I am right bcz u modify my position


    Even when I drink, eat, meet, seat, I need your permission


    Tell me rere what I can do more towards life perfection


    I am keeping my profile with you, it is not movie sci-fiction


    Or a story I came up with, it is not my infection


    My poems can't say for you, how value u r to the exhibition


    That is shown inside my heart as watching it by television


    I swear god, I feel like I can listen to u by radio


    I know this very hard to happen, that's why I am telling you


    The only words making me survive is I love you


    That you mean so much to me as watching me by video


    Till I say it straight to you from any kind of audio


    I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU





    Thank you... hope everybody like it

    Aziz
    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

    سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

    {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM
  • محمد أمين
    عضو متألق
    • Sep 2003
    • 2582

    #2
    الرد: Thinking about you all time "new poem" m

    اضيف في الأساس بواسطة corvette777

    The only words making me survive is I love you



    Wow , I'm totally impressed , so romantic ... first your intro about the poem then the golden verses you wrote , anybody read your poem can easily feel your true real love to this person , I'm really happy to see such a wonderful poem in the forum , plz keep up the good work my dear bro. Aziz

    with my best regards , Mohamed
    Mohamed Amin

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    • corvette777
      عضو بارز
      • Jan 2001
      • 1796

      #3
      الرد: Thinking about you all time "new poem" m

      اضيف في الأساس بواسطة محمد أمين
      Wow , I'm totally impressed , so romantic ... first your intro about the poem then the golden verses you wrote , anybody read your poem can easily feel your true real love to this person , I'm really happy to see such a wonderful poem in the forum , plz keep up the good work my dear bro. Aziz

      with my best regards , Mohamed
      Hi my dear Brother, Mohammed Ameen

      I am so glad that you read my poems and you replied to me and I am more glad that you liked my poem and you could feel my truthfully words to this person who bursts the best of me.. and your nice comment was an honor to me and to my poem... thank you so much Brother Mohammed and wish you very happy and blessed ramadan...

      Aziz
      SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

      سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

      {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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