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  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796
    #1

    My newest poem <<Specially to you>>

    First of all ... I missed this forum very much... and I missed every members were in this forum.. I think most of them gone... but I hope I can be good friends to all of new members... I see daloo3a and yasmeen are very active,,, they have great subjects actually.. They are the soul of this forum ofcourse besides My dear brother Q8y..anyway I was very fond of writting poems in this forum and I still have alot to write and to share with everyone...

    I have a special poem to someone I know... and here it comes :
    I love you since I have seen you
    I love you and my hurt is hurting
    I want you, I need you
    Tell me that you care
    Tell me you had sometimes thinks about me for a little
    I really dreamed to say hi to you but it's hard to be real
    I'm blind eyes because you are there away from me
    I LOVE YOU by every letter I have wrritten specially to you

    I hope you like it my poem.... best wishes to everyone..

    CORVETTE777
    آخر تعديل بواسطة corvette777; 05-06-2002, 10:36 AM.
    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

    سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

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    • نجمة الليالي
      عضو
      • Jun 2002
      • 13
      #2
      hey ^_^
      looks good ya?
      just a few mistakes if you don't mind me saying

      I love you since I have seen you

      I love you and my hurt is hurting
      My HEART is hurting
      I want you, I need you

      Tell me that you care

      Tell me you had sometimes thinks about me for a little
      Tell me you have thought about me a little
      or
      tell me you sometimes think about me
      I really dreamed to say hi to you but it's hard to be real

      I'm blind eyes because you are there away from me
      My eyes are blind because you're away from me
      I LOVE YOU by every letter I have wrritten specially to you
      I LOVE YOu and every letter I have written is especially for you


      all in all *thmbs up* good effort
      Trust in the dream within you
      allow it to lead the way
      no matter how they challange us
      they can't take it away
      though we may outnumbered
      we are a mighty throng
      the cause for which we fight
      makes us a thousand armies strong

      ~Napoleon~

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        • yasmeen
          عضو متميز
          • Oct 2001
          • 6284
          #3
          nice one corvette

          and nijma did a good job here, with some changes it will be even more beautifull

          but all in all,so sweet ,so nice

          i too give u a thump up
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            • corvette777
              عضو بارز
              • Jan 2001
              • 1796
              #4
              Thanks Nijmat Al-liyaly for your correction my mistakes and for your reply

              Thanks to you too yasmeen for your reply..


              corvette777
              SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

              سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

              {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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                • Q8y
                  عضو متألق
                  • Feb 2001
                  • 2092
                  #5


                  Corvette777 Hi Hi Hi Hi

                  How r ya man ? Welcome back to ur home i mean to ur forum ...

                  now i can see why the lights everywhere why every one is happy , we should celebrate of that

                  wait wait .. let me bring a chocolate cake ..

                  it's party time

                  Take Care Man ...


                  حــــلــــوة يــــــــا كـــــويـــــت


                  أزرق كــويـــتـــي


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                    • corvette777
                      عضو بارز
                      • Jan 2001
                      • 1796
                      #6
                      Mr. Q8y...

                      I missed you man very much... Wheneven I see corvette car , I remember that you and me like to take a pictuare for it... I'm fine man and I'm so happy to be here with you man.. It's your forum too . You are the one who took care of this forum and you deserve to make for you a big celebration Thanks man.. I hope I can do anything to make this forum beautifull as it was with you

                      SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

                      سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

                      {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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                        • phalastiniah
                          عضو فعال
                          • May 2001
                          • 143
                          #7
                          hi every body.....
                          im happy to come back here again
                          nice poem corvette

                          hi Q8y there is a party and you din't tell me
                          don't worry i will bring the cake
                          PHALASTINIAH

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                            • corvette777
                              عضو بارز
                              • Jan 2001
                              • 1796
                              #8
                              Hi Phalistiniah..

                              We are happy to see you again in English forum and we are looking for your nice subjects here in this forum .. Thanks your reply and don't worry about the cake , Q8y promised that he will bring a chocolate one and if you don't mind, we want a vanillia's cake and I will bring the cokes

                              Thanks your coming Phalistinah
                              SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

                              سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

                              {{CLICK HERE}} TO VISIT ENGLISH FORUM

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                                  نحن نعالج البيانات الشخصية لمستخدمي موقعنا عبر استخدام ملفات تعريف الارتباط (الكوكيز) وتقنيات أخرى، وذلك لتقديم خدماتنا، وتخصيص الإعلانات، وتحليل نشاط الموقع. وقد نشارك بعض المعلومات الخاصة بمستخدمينا مع شركائنا في الإعلانات والتحليلات. لمزيد من التفاصيل، يُرجى الرجوع إلى سياسة الخصوصية.

                                  بالنقر على "أوافق" أدناه، فإنك توافق على سياسة الخصوصية وعلى ممارساتنا المتعلقة بمعالجة البيانات الشخصية وملفات تعريف الارتباط كما هو موضح فيها. كما تُقرّ بأن هذا المنتدى قد يكون مُستضافًا خارج بلدك، وتوافق على جمع بياناتك وتخزينها ومعالجتها في البلد الذي يُستضاف فيه هذا المنتدى.

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