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  • corvette777
    عضو بارز
    • Jan 2001
    • 1796

    #1

    a Story that I wrote :)

    Hi All ,

    I will wrote a story that I have imagined it that it would happen to me, and probably it will contain some grammar mistakes but for give me about it, because I'll wrote without checking my grammar.... Hope you will like it .. I would like to say this story isn't true but many times I would to happen ..



    We were so friend, so close to eachother. We were talking about almost every except the love part. We exchanging a respect relationship in our deals, our speech, ..etc and that were the reasons we didn't have try talking about love . We have met in the internet " The fastest way to get a friend" then we began to email eachother almost everyday. We were talking about experiences in our daily life, I have known some stuff about her. She was genius in her school, very intelligent. She likes watching movies, parties, travels, read stories and adventures and the strange thing that I like all those stuff too!She hates what I hate too! I liked being friend with her, we have a lot of common opinions and dreams. By all these connectors of friendship, we have been for more than a year as friends , until then, I considered on her in different way, more than just friend. I don't know how I became think or how I became act?! I didn't care ... we presisted as friend for long time..

    After that I was totally changed, she was my obsession. I started tninking about her almost everyday even if I got off from internet. Then I asked myself '' What is happening to me? " I'm not the person who was before even my friends told me that. I know she was the reason but I tried to not blame her and convincing myself by any other reason. The pathetic point that I never can tell her what I feel , because if I did, she would probably refuse that idea and then I would be crashed. so I didn't want to risk by my life. so I pressed on myself and looked for a hope and dreams . All my feelings came out as text in my note book and keep it for a happiness history that I imagined it im my future. I ranaway from my fictional dreaming by visit friends and hang out and think of my career . But it's all didn't effect that much , I loved her such as heroes love in the movies and I need her as a thirsty kid crying to drink drops of water . She was my balm when I have any problem. We have graduated from school and everyone would seperate from the same city we live to a college which located in different countries , that made me feel so bad but I had to get in that. Suddenly, she has surprised me that she will travel to see her college "I'm going to travel morning on saturday!" she said. On that time I told to myself that I have to see her at airport , maybe I'll be lucky and see her.. I know I don't know what she looks- like but I know she as my age and has little brother and her parents will travel with her too. So I thought that I can see her from far sight and search about family has one little boy and one girl at least that in my age (That was the condetion to mention her) . In the day before her flight I have exacted my alarm on early morning time. then.....



    I will continue next time.. I have to go to bed now... As I noticed this isn't true , I just used my imagination... Hope you liked the first part from the story so see you next part
    SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

    سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

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  • yasmeen
    عضو متميز
    • Oct 2001
    • 6284

    #2
    good try corvette

    despite some gramatical mistakes,its nice

    and to get over this problem we have with grammars,we ought to read,and read ,it can really improve our language

    thanx for the nice story bro.......and plz keep posting us such nice stories
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    • rakan
      عضو فعال
      • Oct 2000
      • 603

      #3
      good story

      we wait the next part



      rakan
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      • phalastiniah
        عضو فعال
        • May 2001
        • 143

        #4
        hii
        nice story.....
        we are waitinig the next part
        PHALASTINIAH

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        • corvette777
          عضو بارز
          • Jan 2001
          • 1796

          #5
          Hello everyone... sorry that I late , I haven't had enough time to write but I have now ..so here's the next part



          I have exacted my alarm on early morning time. then I went bed . After that, my alarm has rang at the time that I had exacted to wake up, but I didn't wake up. Then I waked up after 2 hours from that time. I looked at my watch then I said " Oh my god, I late although I don't know what time her plane will take off" . I got fast wear my dress although I don't know if her plane take off or not!!! Anyway I drove as fast as I could to the Airport and all my mind was wondering about her plane time. But I told to myself " I will know the answer after 10 minuted only" . When I arrived at the airport, I parked my car then I ran into inside. Then I looked at the flights schedule then I found her plane will take off at the 10: 30 then I looked at my watch, the time was 10: 15 , there's 15 minutes left . I checked around , wishing to see her before she entered plane.. but there wasn't any trace for any passenger. after 5 minutes from my arrival and during check around, they suddenly noticed about the plane that she was in that it already took off . I missed the plane and I missed the chance to see her. After all my plans, I failed . But then I imagined what if I came earlier to the airport? would I can see her ?? Maybe...
          I back at home thinking of the moment that they announced about her plane.. After I given up to see her in another chance , she had given me an Email from there. She said "........ I will back at next monday" . I cheered up because of that & I waited patiently till the date of her arrival. But I insisted that time to wake up early and I did .. I'm now have big chance to see her that time . I went there and the arrival schedule apeared that her airport will arrive at 5:00 p.m. I went home then at 5 p.m. I was at the airprt waiting to see the person who tired my mind. But he deserves that so I didn't care except do my goal . Her airport arrived and she definately inside it . The passengers began to appear , but I was looking for a girl in my age and little boy and parents .. I saw some families like that but they weren't as the perfect condition till I saw a small boy then his parents were beside him and a daughter in my age was behind them. She was verrrrrrrrrrrry beautiful as I always imagined her . I said to myself " definately that she is!! " . Finally I saw the person who captured my heart and at least I can remember her face whenever she send me Emails ...


          --------------THE END-------------

          What do you think of the story??
          SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

          سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

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          • phalastiniah
            عضو فعال
            • May 2001
            • 143

            #6
            its anice story
            but you have finished it in a strange way
            coz there will be many people who has a small boy and a daugter
            ???????!!!!!!!!!
            see
            so
            how did the writer know her????
            anyway its anice story keep writing
            ok.....
            PHALASTINIAH

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            • corvette777
              عضو بارز
              • Jan 2001
              • 1796

              #7
              Hi Phalastiniah

              The writer has know her when I said :

              I saw some families like that but they weren't as the perfect condition

              The perfect condition is when the small boy looks in intermediate school, a girl must be 18 aged and her parents are existing too. Yes, there was many families has a small boy and a daughter but the writer putted aside them. either if the small boy was little aged such as baby or probably the girl was younger than what the writer has known about her. Also, there was some families has more than one small boy ..etc But in the final, he saw a girl that 18 years aged ( she looks 18) , and the small boy looked in an intermediate school.. By this way, he has known that is the girl he was looking for

              corvette777
              SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO BE A HERO

              سبحان الله وبحمده.. سبحان الله العظيم

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