Good job ppl

im so glad to see u participating ,

if ull allow me, before voting,id like to talk about each story ,

ROCK ROAD, ur story is so simple and nice,and it has an aim, as for gramatical mistakes,ive seen near to non, so good job >

HANDSOME BOY, i liked ur story very much,though its so short, its so straight forward , and with simple words and example u gave us a lesson, very nice>


RAKAN, ur story is really taken from reality, it talks about some old habbits we still have in our comunity, but the problem in the story,it has many mistakes,gramatical to be particular, and in a way,it weakened the story, but all in all, ur story was great>

أغلى هدية
u wrote a nice simple story, and a happy ending,and there was a lesson there too,but same as rakan,the gramatical mistakes weakened the story a little, it changed some meanings,though i really liked the story, good job sis >


corvettee
the picture in ur story, the colour u used, and the way it was written was so gr8 and nice, the story its self was nice,but it sounded like a poem more than a story , but still i liked it >


all of u did a great job,i wish its allowed to vote for more than 2, but thats the rule of the contest,therfore,i vote for the best two,




HANDSOME BOY

CORVETTEE

best wishes to all
with love

I would vote for:

(The Thief and the Envelope)

Thank You الحسام for your voted

you should have vote for one more

السلام عليكم
إذا كان بإمكاني أشارك في الإختيار أنا أختار


أغلى هديه

و


راكان


شكرا

انا ارشح

handsome boy

we need more votes guys...where are you???

this is my story

انا اسفه لاني جيت متأخره بس جلست ادور قصص حلوه وما لقيت الا هذه القصه ومن اين ما اعرف بس احوس في النت وارجوا السماحه بعد لاني كتبت القصه هنيه ما اعرف وين اخليها يالله نتوكل على الله :




One day a father of a very wealthy family took his son on a trip to
the country with the firm purpose of showing his son how poor
people live.

They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of what would be considered
a very poor family. On their return from their trip, the father asked his son,
"How was the trip?"

"It was great, Dad!

"Did you see how poor people live?" the father asked.

"Oh yeah," said the son.

"So, tell me, what did you learn from the trip?" asked the father.

The son answered: "I saw that we have one dog and they had four. We have a pool
that reaches to the middle of our garden and they have a creek that has no end.
We have imported lanterns in our garden and they have the stars at night. Our
patio reaches to the front yard and they have the whole horizon. We have a
small piece of land to live on and they have fields that go beyond our sight.
We have servants who serve us, but they serve others. We buy our food, but they
grow theirs. We have walls around our property to protect us, they have friends
to protect them."

The boy's father was speechless. Then his son added, "Thanks, Dad, for showing
me how poor we are

صراحة بسملة القصة حلوة كتير

و لو انك كتبتيها قبل هيك كان انا صوتت لقصتك

بس المشكلة انو الوقت انتهى و بدأ التصويت للقصص اللي شاركت

خيرها بغيرها انشاء الله



شكرا كتييييييييييييييير للقصة الحلوة

مشكورة على القصة ربما قصتك لم تدخل بالمسابقة لكن يكفيك إعجاب الناس بها

Hand some boy


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hmmmmm






rock road hhhhhhmmmmm he dont hv any voice

Hi to all of you

I hope the voting for stories is still going on,,,,well my vote is to

**Rakan
Your story is really very nice, I’m always fascinated with stories adopted from our reality, it conveys morals we are missing in the present time, also your story is neat even though the grammatical mistakes it has.

**Corvett
Your story is very very neat and supported by a nice picture besides it's grammaticaly correct and has many morals, it also figures out a real problem we have in our societies.


I want also to comment on the rest of the stories:

Aghla hadia: I like your story it's really very neat and has nice looking and has many morals, I wish you all the best.

Handsome boy and Rock road : well your stories teach us many values in life but although that they have many grammatical mistakes and not neat enough, and I can notice that no photos or pictures.

My best regards and all the best for you