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  • ام اي عزيزي
    عضو فعال

    • Mar 2005
    • 685

    #1

    my love story





    Let us get to it directly

    My love story
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    She was a girl and she was beautiful this is simple and obvious to say to you but for her it was flattering. As many times as I have repeated that she gave no response nor a word just )) SILENENCE (( ! I loved to talk to her but I don't think she does so ! I have tried many times through different means to reach the message to her but she never show any kind of any reaction until a day has come !




    A day I was coming back from College around 10,00 P.M. she appears to me in the street with her tow girlfriends and while I was walking towards HOME carrying my Notes Books
    :she laughed at me and said


    ( YOU ARE SO ACTIVE SCHOOL BOY )
    She meant to show me hershining beautiful face in order to know her but my lips didn't move her tow girlfriends laughed again in an unpleasant way for a moment I was about to answer but the same thing that tied up my lips prevent me from being reacting again. She disappeared by the end of that street leaving behind her more complexity more doubts in an exhausting mind



    (1) Nought's had, all's spent where our desire got without content



    what do you think my feeling is ? my heart looks like a person in a cold night suffering from a very cold wind playing with him left and right with No closed Eyes No rest No talking with a tired body tired brain thinking !!




    I have spent that night with these Questions ?

    Why she laughed ?

    Why she said that sentence ?

    Does she said it to mock at me ? Or she said it to praise me ?

    Why her tow girlfriends laughed is it a normal means through girls to draw boys attention or is it really meant for insulting ?


    Of course I found no answers till sleeping defeated that tired overloaded body



    For the next nights not days cause I have ordered my timetable for her ignoring the real job that I referred to her look her voice her appearance but, guess what she doesn't appear nor her tow demons bodyguard girls


    It is OK I hope for the next coming nights she will appear at least to say the sameobscure words I just want her to communicate with me even though with a sign language but she has to interact with me she has to



    Week after week passed, with No good news and nothing improved

    I said to myself why all these torturing thoughts? she doesn't clarify her feeling nor her position on me so there is no need to start torture cause we will have time for that I guess



    never say I love you

    if you really don't care

    never talk about feelings

    that aren't really there

    never hold my hand

    if you're going to break my heart

    never say your going to

    if you don't plan to start

    never look into my eyes

    if all you do is lies

    never say hello

    if you really mean goodbye

    if you mean forever than say you will always try

    to tell me how you feel,

    if you don't then

    I won't know what your feelings are

    to me and then

    (2) I will just go




    At the time I have finished my third term in college I discovered that my average were very low to have a good career job So I decided to forget about the internet and it's forums -(that’s before I joined you here in sandroses)- and get back to work so close so hard in order to achieve a good average that may allowed me to stay here in Jeddah and have a job between my family and my friends and that’s girl !!


    So I started by visiting Jarir Bookstore to buy some English books it was on short stories that can help me improve my bad English therefore, READING really improve your English my friend if you are listening !! more details about reading in this page :

    http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?t=110688






    Moreover, I have tried my ears listening to the BBC News and other programs in English it helped me so much ! you can listen to it too in this page :



    http://www.sandroses.com/abbs/showthread.php?t=108849





    I have spent my vacation studying and enjoying English by different methods from play station GAMES, practicing my English with some people who can talk this language and eventually, books reading.




    Back to that extraordinary girl, I discovered that her family lift their home and traveled to spent their holiday outside from here from Jeddah they like to make use of their holidays not like me ! So I have to wait until she comes back I have to wait !!




    _________________ End of part ONE _______________




    Copy not reserved

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    (1)Shakespeare


    (2) Never by: Chelsea


    آخر تعديل بواسطة ام اي عزيزي; 03-07-2005, 08:10 PM.
  • محمد أمين
    عضو متألق
    • Sep 2003
    • 2582

    #2
    الرد: my love story

    I've nothing to say but WOW , I really liked your love story , it's so touching , I really can't wait to here to read part II , I'm waiting for it , and may allah bless you my friend .

    and don't be late in putting part II , coz we are so eager to read it

    with my best wishes

    Mohamed Amin
    Mohamed Amin

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    • الواثق بالله
      عضو بارز
      • Mar 2005
      • 1903

      #3
      الرد: my love story

      wa alikom al salam
      how are you I hope your fine I MISS YOU
      Thank you my dear brother
      about the enjoying story
      A very beautiful story
      and a coordinated talk
      I wish the increase to you
      ******
      I shall return once more
      when you write
      The remainder from the story
      إله السماء إلهٌ واحد
      وآلهة الشيعة إثنى عشر
      دعاء السنة لله صاعد
      ودعاء الشيعة رهينُ البشر

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      • ام اي عزيزي
        عضو فعال

        • Mar 2005
        • 685

        #4
        الرد: my love story

        عجبتكم ها مافي يلا امشوا
        اول اكتبوا قصتكم بعدين اكملكم


































        I'm Joking
        ___________________
        you just wait

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        • محمد أمين
          عضو متألق
          • Sep 2003
          • 2582

          #5
          الرد: my love story

          اضيف في الأساس بواسطة ام اي عزيزي
          عجبتكم ها مافي يلا امشوا
          اول اكتبوا قصتكم بعدين اكملكم
          احم احم , و ليه الأحراج ده ههههههههههههه , بس ليك عليّا يا عم بعد ما تخلص قصتك , هحط قصتي بالتفصيل الممل أن شاء الله
          Mohamed Amin

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          • ام اي عزيزي
            عضو فعال

            • Mar 2005
            • 685

            #6
            الرد: my love story

            انا قاعد امزح راح اكتبها بس اصبروا شوية لأنه عندي اعمال كثيرة يا عسل

            مافي احراج ولاشي

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            دي اول مزحة ثقيلة دم
            ها ها ها

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            • محمد أمين
              عضو متألق
              • Sep 2003
              • 2582

              #7
              الرد: my love story

              اضيف في الأساس بواسطة ام اي عزيزي
              انا قاعد امزح راح اكتبها بس اصبروا شوية لأنه عندي اعمال كثيرة يا عسل

              مافي احراج ولاشي

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              دي اول مزحة ثقيلة دم
              ها ها ها
              خد راحتك أخي الحبيب , و ان شاء الله أول ما تخلص قصتك , هكتب بتاعتي , ياللا خلينا نظهر فضايحنا العاطفية ههههههههههههههههههههههههههه
              Mohamed Amin

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              • ام اي عزيزي
                عضو فعال

                • Mar 2005
                • 685

                #8
                الرد: my love story




                PART TOW
                Final one
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                Different Students and pupils return back to their school by the end of the summer Vacationand I was waiting for this Vacation to end it's long journey. Therefore, my girl will return home that maybe I can talk to her again. Now she is everything I have to care about and everything I have to concentrate on I wouldn't lose her if she cares about me but if she doesn't then it will be more complex to me to follow.



                HoursandhoursI 've spent it waiting inside my car listening to theradio looking at the people who pass by me and say AS-slam Alycom..

                And finally, at early evening I saw one of the bodyguard girls who was with my girl last time walking in front of me I don't know where she was going to but, I follow her that I can get answers for the absence of my one. While I was creeping towards her and I have get quite close to her I heard sound coming from the back of me saying

                Hey what are you doing ?



                I have got astonished cause I'm sure that before I aim at her Nobody were behind me from where thatparasite man came? So I turn to that person and asked him : what wrong ?

                Why you are getting close to that girl he said, I said to him calm down I'm not getting close to any body and you can ask her whether if I have talked to her or even say sth ? he said I saw you by my own eyes you are getting nearer to her so don't be afraid of me just tell me I might help you ? I really gotdisgust and said listen ya guy if I need sth from that girl I wouldn't talk to you and ask you to help me and you too you wouldn't ask me for help in similar case so, stop playing dump and get away from me. "Huh", he replied, I give up such nasty conversation saying to myself



                If you want to across the river don’t tell the crocodile that he has a bad breath(3)

                What a bad luck I start headed for my car back again and spent that night waiting and blaming myself for getting nothing because of that nosy guy.


                For the next couples of days at King Abdulaziz Hospital by luck by nice luck I found my pretty girl but unfortunately my mother was with me we were visiting her sister my aunt so I just looked at her - "in our culture even though you wouldn't talk to a foreign girl in front of people it will be shameful " – and she looked at me and I looked at her again and she finally smile at me this is relieved this is good to begin firing questions at her when we met next time.


                You smiled at my pretense
                As you broke down my defenses
                Just want to be where you are
                Love ain't like fashion
                The look remains the same
                I'll wear your heart forever
                'Cause some things never change
                Like rain, tax ,
                (4)

                When we come back home I have waited that’s night for her to come minutes and seconds moving so slowly until she finally came with her girlfriend !! that's after 11 p.m. I didn't know what to do or say !!

                you may have been exposed to a similar feeling especially after a long time of waiting. I start to move from my place and I dare to speak out I want to get out from thatrestricted position and asked her if she can give me some time to talk to her she respond to me with laughter still in her mouth saying: yeah I can talk to you………. what you want ?

                oh I...I.… I just want you to accept my phone number and I hope you can call me at the time you like. We end up with this. She took my phone number but the way she treated me was also foggy and not that clear.



                What a bad idea I didn't even asked her about her phone number or her name. Well actually, I'm not sure whether if she has a phone mobile or not. But the name was important to know. Now how can I know her when she call. It is total foolishness. Anyway, I hope she will call. I returned to my Vehicle until they disappear. What a nice night. Guess what I shouldn't sleep and I was thinking if she can get access to the phone at late night and call me ! you know, some times calling at late night time has special taste for new lover isn't ?

                The phone doesn't ring at all and each time my brother's phone rang I thought my phone till he suspects the way I behave so I headed to my bed and try to get to sleep by reading some books.



                The next day was Friday, I have a date with my friends to go for a match in Football near the stadium of prince Abdullah Al Faisal the main stadium of Jeddah.

                We spent a very nice time and played such strong match but, regrettably some of our friends got hurts and they turn the match into a real fight because of a plenty decided by the referee by mistake.



                After the match ended we stayed at the stadium for half an hour that we discussed some of our problems at the match actually it waspoppycock talks no need for it. We just waste some time talking and scattering the bad atmosphere

                After that we return back home and I found my girl in front of me again with no date it was a really nice and beautiful surprise cause I have dressed very well so my girl can see that I know how to dress ! showing off , you know some times people doing that I bet you if you will say sth else.



                I just like not to head directly to home so I can have a tte-- tte with her in any backlane of our quarter. But, it doesn't work that she pretend as she doesn't understand what I meant. So she left me again without real touch or date between us. As she also forgot about the number I gave her. Why she is doing that ? why she insisted on behaving in that manner ignoring, no care, and no word.



                At the same night, I have received call from an unknown, saying with great laughing are you Abdulaziz are you that lover guy Huh ? listen to me I have took you phone number because I don't want to embarrass you, NO more NO less and I also don't like a suspicious relationship if you do like me you can knock on our door and say what you want to my parents. I have got astonished and become disconcerted that she was strongly-worded but I kept standing and said : that's OK your words were so beautiful and…she interrupts me and said : listen many people said the same thing and you said the same thing and I don't know who's the honest one
                ! AGAIN WHAT YOU WANT HONEY ?

                I didn't concentrate enough and quickly said : I want to be your boyfriend !

                She said : MY BOYFRIEND HUH …

                And she closed the phone .



                I can tell you that she became more beautiful and trustful girl and she is not like the girls who sell their body for the sake of love. I was wrong and she was right.


                (يَا أَيُّهَا الَّذِينَ آمَنُوا لا تَتَّبِعُوا خُطُوَاتِ الشَّيْطَانِ وَمَنْ يَتَّبِعْ خُطُوَاتِ الشَّيْطَانِ فَإِنَّهُ يَأْمُرُ بِالْفَحْشَاءِ وَالْمُنْكَرِ وَلَوْلا فَضْلُ اللَّهِ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَتُهُ مَا زَكَى مِنْكُمْ مِنْ أَحَدٍ أَبَداً وَلَكِنَّ اللَّهَ يُزَكِّي مَنْ يَشَاءُ وَاللَّهُ سَمِيعٌ عَلِيمٌ) النور:21



                _________________ End of Story _______________




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                (3)Me Leing quoted

                (4) Celine Dion,(Rain,Tax) written down by Terry Britten, Charlie Dore

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                • محمد أمين
                  عضو متألق
                  • Sep 2003
                  • 2582

                  #9
                  الرد: my love story

                  Wow , I really don't know what to say , inside me there are alot of feelings ....you know diffrent ones , I'm really very disappointed about how the story had ended , and on the other hand I'm really so happy coz there are religious and decent girls like this one in our societies , you know what .... if she accepted being your gf , you would suffer with her alot and even if you married to her in the future , I don't wanna interfere your private life my dear brother , but take it an advice from your brother .... when you get married , choose a girl like her even her if you could , coz girls like that are capable of taking care of there religion , husband and family not like alot of others .

                  Finally I really wanna thank you from the deep of my heart , this story really teaches me alot in this life , it also so touchy and romantic , and it made me know that we have a great romantic writer with us here , I'm so happy coz I've a friend and brother like you here in the forum , and may allah make this friendship and brotherhood last forever ........

                  as I promised you , I'm gonna write the story of the first love in my life , this love story which was the reason of my poetry talent , and I'm gonna write it so soon .

                  with my best regards to you my dear bro

                  Mohamed Amin
                  Mohamed Amin

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                  • ام اي عزيزي
                    عضو فعال

                    • Mar 2005
                    • 685

                    #10
                    الرد: my love story


                    Hello My best friend and thanks for your followings:
                    _____________________________________________________________

                    you are right my friend this kind of girls we need and i'm not saying that because of sth wrong in my personal emotions relationship no but because most of the girls now follow their heart's beatings and they really don't think enough time before they get interfere with others
                    so i gave a quick answer for similar case
                    i hope my message has been arrived


                    it is so confused when you want to get married even though if you choose
                    a religious and good girl

                    she might do sth wrong because you have done it in other girls before marrying


                    Am I a romantic writer you are flattering my friend


                    thanks again for your care
                    best wishes


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